Change will Come.
God the only constant, believe.11 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Things always change for change is inevitable and it is true, God is constant, we believe in God for changes that will come positively; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Things always change for change is inevitable and it is true, God is constant, we believe in God for changes that will come positively; well said, well done.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. God bless you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I don't know if this makes me feel good or nervous! What if I don't want anything to change. But your poem is strong. I love how you have "Believe!" on it's own -really emphasizes that point. Very creative and well don.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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I don't know if this makes me feel good or nervous! What if I don't want anything to change. But your poem is strong. I love how you have "Believe!" on it's own -really emphasizes that point. Very creative and well don.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. God bless you.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Laura, I think for sure, that this is one thing that we can say for certain. Things always do change. This 20 syllables says a lot. Nicely done, good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Laura, I think for sure, that this is one thing that we can say for certain. Things always do change. This 20 syllables says a lot. Nicely done, good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this great reminder! "Things always change" but Jesus, our Rock, is changeless and is always the same yesterday, today and forever. Please stay safe!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this great reminder! "Things always change" but Jesus, our Rock, is changeless and is always the same yesterday, today and forever. Please stay safe!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you my friend, I hope you are well, God bless, you. Amen standing on our Rock.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aahhh... tis true things will always change, but, knowing that, we move forward in Faith! ;) Wonderful offering, Laura! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Aahhh... tis true things will always change, but, knowing that, we move forward in Faith! ;) Wonderful offering, Laura! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks Yvette. Hope you are keeping well, xo
Comment from samandlancelot
Lauralumummu,
Sometimes things change for the good and sometimes for bad (in this world) but in the midst of changes, God changes us to be more like Him. And that's always a good change.
Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Lauralumummu,
Sometimes things change for the good and sometimes for bad (in this world) but in the midst of changes, God changes us to be more like Him. And that's always a good change.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your thoughtful review, God bless you
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your creatively composed poem--coupled with the statement of faith in the notes--is very moving and inspirational. Only God knows what will happen. It's all in His hands.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Your creatively composed poem--coupled with the statement of faith in the notes--is very moving and inspirational. Only God knows what will happen. It's all in His hands.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you Janice, I hope you are keeping well, God Bless you.
Comment from QC Poet
Yes, and Unfortunately we have some people profiteering of others misery more and more.
Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you. Stay Safe and Healthy.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Yes, and Unfortunately we have some people profiteering of others misery more and more.
Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you. Stay Safe and Healthy.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review, I hope you are well, God bless you too.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This reads a bit like a draft, which is unfortunate as the subject and approach are both good. I think you have too many weak or empty words - try to remove so you can polish what's left.
around > round (+1)
Things always change > change will come (+1) (thus change title ? no going back)
never > don"t (+1)
Perhaps: thinking of you > thinking of you far away
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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This reads a bit like a draft, which is unfortunate as the subject and approach are both good. I think you have too many weak or empty words - try to remove so you can polish what's left.
around > round (+1)
Things always change > change will come (+1) (thus change title ? no going back)
never > don"t (+1)
Perhaps: thinking of you > thinking of you far away
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Aaron Rodenburg
Everything does change... except God. Nice intro to pull more depth to the poem. A great way to stretch a 20 syllable poem. Good photo choice to illustrate time. Good luck with the judges!
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Everything does change... except God. Nice intro to pull more depth to the poem. A great way to stretch a 20 syllable poem. Good photo choice to illustrate time. Good luck with the judges!
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanks Aaron, Your review is appreciated.
