Down By the Ocean
Inner Peace..........17 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
It's amazing how nature affects our peace like down by the ocean or deep in the woods in true silence. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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It's amazing how nature affects our peace like down by the ocean or deep in the woods in true silence. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind words.
May you & your family stay well and safe...harmony13
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lovely write, perfect in its depiction of the power of the ocean. I can easily relate, since I purposely live in somewhat close proximity to the ocean, for the benefit this writer has so aptly described in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, a lovely write, perfect in its depiction of the power of the ocean. I can easily relate, since I purposely live in somewhat close proximity to the ocean, for the benefit this writer has so aptly described in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review. I really appreciated you
extraordinary comments. Be well and stay safe....harmony13
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You are very welcome indeed - I draw my strength from the ocean, as you apparently do. I wish you the same, be well, stay safe and add, be happy...Eve
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Simply stated. Lovely picture. Good water imagery re ocean and floods. Surrender happens is a twist on the usual surrender here as noun vs verb. Keeps things fresh. Nice piece. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Simply stated. Lovely picture. Good water imagery re ocean and floods. Surrender happens is a twist on the usual surrender here as noun vs verb. Keeps things fresh. Nice piece. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe..... harmony13
Comment from Minglement
This is a absolutely beautiful entry for the 3-line poetry contest. You've written one of my favorite subjects a expressed my feelings as though you were reading my mind lol. Beautiful presentation as well Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is a absolutely beautiful entry for the 3-line poetry contest. You've written one of my favorite subjects a expressed my feelings as though you were reading my mind lol. Beautiful presentation as well Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe..... harmony13
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My pleasure and thank you. Take care
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Down By the Ocean
by harmony13
Hello my friend
Beautiful
3 Line Poetry Contest contest entry. Good syllable count. The lines connect and flow well. Good luck.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Down By the Ocean
by harmony13
Hello my friend
Beautiful
3 Line Poetry Contest contest entry. Good syllable count. The lines connect and flow well. Good luck.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe..... harmony13
Comment from joycetreasures
This is a lovely poem. First, I love the image you used. The words within your poem are so fitting for your title, "Down By The Ocean." I love the water; really any variation of water. I am usually at peace when I am near the ocean. It's so calming. I agree, I surrender my inner self when I am near the ocean. This is a simple, yet very powerful message. Thanks for sharing. No errors.
Keep writing:-)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is a lovely poem. First, I love the image you used. The words within your poem are so fitting for your title, "Down By The Ocean." I love the water; really any variation of water. I am usually at peace when I am near the ocean. It's so calming. I agree, I surrender my inner self when I am near the ocean. This is a simple, yet very powerful message. Thanks for sharing. No errors.
Keep writing:-)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review. I really appreciated you
extraordinary comments. Be well and stay safe....harmony13
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you are welcome
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This a very lovely presentation. Your little poem says a lot. It provokes my thoughts to walks on the beach in Florida and the lapping of waves I hear at night from my bedroom. It is so peaceful and calming. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This a very lovely presentation. Your little poem says a lot. It provokes my thoughts to walks on the beach in Florida and the lapping of waves I hear at night from my bedroom. It is so peaceful and calming. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe..... harmony13
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about finding inner peace for the mind down by the ocean where the wind blows the cobwebs in our minds away abd the waves noise bring us silent peace.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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A very well-written three-line poem about finding inner peace for the mind down by the ocean where the wind blows the cobwebs in our minds away abd the waves noise bring us silent peace.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hi Sandra, thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe.....Maria
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing the spectacular,eye-catching artwork and your serene, parallel 3-Line Poem. Here's to inner peace and best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing the spectacular,eye-catching artwork and your serene, parallel 3-Line Poem. Here's to inner peace and best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hi Joan, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Stay well and be safe.....Maria
Comment from Sally Law
I'm not sure what better, this lovely poem or seeing you, Maria dear. It is a blessing just to see your smiling face and read your fine poem. I love the beach, too, and all things related to the shore.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I'm not sure what better, this lovely poem or seeing you, Maria dear. It is a blessing just to see your smiling face and read your fine poem. I love the beach, too, and all things related to the shore.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hi Sally,Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Hope you and your family are well and safe. Always
good to hear from you...?Blessing, Maria
