An Angel in the Meadow
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Comment from Tootie
HURRAH! It is such an HONOR writing at your side. As you know, you get at least 90% of the credit for this AWESOME chapter! Love the humor throughout, as well as the memories of Bret when he was younger. Now, Angel and Bret are in danger. The cave entrance has collapsed and they're stuck inside. Will Bret save them both, will he, huh? (Well, we can stay there for a while first, 'cause I enjoy your company!) I know we are already working on Chapter 5, as well as several chapters from our other books. YAY!!! We're writing faster than...."a purebred horse in a derby!" You Betcha! God Bless, Co-Author!
Respectfully with Admiration and Continuous Heaps of Love,
Cathy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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HURRAH! It is such an HONOR writing at your side. As you know, you get at least 90% of the credit for this AWESOME chapter! Love the humor throughout, as well as the memories of Bret when he was younger. Now, Angel and Bret are in danger. The cave entrance has collapsed and they're stuck inside. Will Bret save them both, will he, huh? (Well, we can stay there for a while first, 'cause I enjoy your company!) I know we are already working on Chapter 5, as well as several chapters from our other books. YAY!!! We're writing faster than...."a purebred horse in a derby!" You Betcha! God Bless, Co-Author!
Respectfully with Admiration and Continuous Heaps of Love,
Cathy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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"SHAZAM!" Quite an "ASTONISHING" review, Co-Author. Are you looking? Writing at your side is "MY" HONOR, and the 90% credit for the chapter belongs to guess who? "YOU!" So, hush your mouth, Colonel, 'cause I still outrank you--"YAY!" "Please, Grandma, hide your broom today!" Now, we have 5-books on the burners, so c'mon and let's move out--"Getty-up!" See my hand? A "SALUTE!" Best wishes and God Bless, CO-AUTHOR!" Respectfully with Admiration and a "TON of LOVE!" Bill
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It is quite clear, by the excellent and unique writing in this chapter, that 90% + of the credit belongs to YOU! I am SO HONORED to write by your side. A "SALUTE!" Respectfully with Admiration and a "GAZILLION TONS of LOVE!" Cathy
Comment from Ulla
Hi to both of you. this was another great chapter and a very animated one. There was great dialogue and very believable. I'm looking forward to what is coming nest. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Hi to both of you. this was another great chapter and a very animated one. There was great dialogue and very believable. I'm looking forward to what is coming nest. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Happy Easter, Ulla! Thanks for the excellent review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. A "SALUTE!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Great story, Cathy and Bill.
I've been off for awhile, or off and on anyway. I'm very familiar with Bill's work, anyway. I'm glad to see the two of you collaborating. It works well.
Great, authentic story.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Great story, Cathy and Bill.
I've been off for awhile, or off and on anyway. I'm very familiar with Bill's work, anyway. I'm glad to see the two of you collaborating. It works well.
Great, authentic story.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Happy Easter, Rhonda! Great hearing from you. Thanks for the Exceptional review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. A "SALUTE!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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Happy Easter to you two as well!
Comment from damommy
This chapter is well-written with many details and good dialogue. Everything reads well. The flow is good to keep readers interested. It is exciting, too. Your characters, their actions, and the story make me want to read more.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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This chapter is well-written with many details and good dialogue. Everything reads well. The flow is good to keep readers interested. It is exciting, too. Your characters, their actions, and the story make me want to read more.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Happy Easter, our dear friend. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. A "SALUTE!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from BethShelby
This is quite a story the two to of you have put together. I grew up in the country and I thought it was about as earthy as it could get but I think this one has it beat. I will continue to read whenever I get a chance. I'm not sure I like the fact that Jesus has to have so much wine to deal with pair. I know it is only meant to be amusing but it is a little much.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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This is quite a story the two to of you have put together. I grew up in the country and I thought it was about as earthy as it could get but I think this one has it beat. I will continue to read whenever I get a chance. I'm not sure I like the fact that Jesus has to have so much wine to deal with pair. I know it is only meant to be amusing but it is a little much.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Beth! Sorry to have offended you about Jesus and the wine. Cathy and I only intended to bring smiles on the readers faces. For your information, We love Jesus! Of course, we meant to be amusing; yet, if it was a little much for you, then we apologize. Hope to see you in Chapter 5. Thanks for the excellent review, and taking the time to read our work. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You mentioned that Angel and you were trapped inside of the cave...this reminded me of Easter Sunday when the stone was removed away from Jesus's tomb. He is alive! I'm sure you'll make it out of your cave safe, too. Have to think positive in these trying times. You are with an angel.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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You mentioned that Angel and you were trapped inside of the cave...this reminded me of Easter Sunday when the stone was removed away from Jesus's tomb. He is alive! I'm sure you'll make it out of your cave safe, too. Have to think positive in these trying times. You are with an angel.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Happy Easter, Rosemary! Thanks for the excellent review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. A "SALUTE!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from bob cullen
The quality of this writing is best illustrated by my desire to keep reading. In reading this I was transported to the location designed in my mind. I don't know if I could write in partnership with someone else as I'd probably insist on control. Reading this all I can think is how fantastically well you two writers blend together as one.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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The quality of this writing is best illustrated by my desire to keep reading. In reading this I was transported to the location designed in my mind. I don't know if I could write in partnership with someone else as I'd probably insist on control. Reading this all I can think is how fantastically well you two writers blend together as one.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Happy Easter, Bob! Thanks for the excellent review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. It is an honor having an awesome writer (YOU) to express admiration for our work. A "SALUTE!" As always, best wishes, and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a lovely young spirited chapter well worth reading. I'm waiting for Chapter Five with baited breath. The story seems so authentic and real. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely young spirited chapter well worth reading. I'm waiting for Chapter Five with baited breath. The story seems so authentic and real. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Happy Easter, Rebecca! Thanks for the excellent review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. It is an honor having an awesome writer (YOU) to express admiration for our presentations. As always, best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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You really do have the gift of writing--even in replies! Thank you for uplifting me today.
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May God bless you for the kind words. Bill and Cathy
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you're quite welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Bill and Cathy, this is an exciting, adventure packed chapter that I loved reading. Your 'Greeting Friends' does exactly as written. One minute, I'm laughing at Bill's antics; and, the next I'm saddened by the outcomes of parts of the story. Both authors do an exceptional job of keeping their own POV; yet, merging it within the framework of the story.
I like the 'Previously' as it sets the tome of what to expect in this chapter. Readers know that great action and dialogue will follow. They ae reminded about the main characters, too.
This chapter started on a high note. Brett is up to his unusual flirty self as Cathy teased him along. She had his 'number.' However, she is still perplexed if she is handling him in the way God intended.
Readers get a glimpse of how life was out in the country from the hunting for meat on the table nd how 'nature's call' was handled. It was all real. We felt their admiration and love of God's creatures with the inclusion of the momma bear taking care of her little ones. Right before we saw the urgency of the imminent attack by the bear; but, God had other plans. When Cathy prays, her words were sincere and believable.
Bill's flashbacks to his earlier times, both on the farm and school, allowed readers to learn more of his personality. There was great poignancy in describing the funerals of Grandpa's brother and sister. The descriptive words let readers envision it as they occurred. Grandma's announcement to Bill to come to breakfast jars us back to reality. She was a strong-willed woman who showed she was wise beyond her age.
The cave-in of the cave was well-described. In just a few sentences, readers understand the dilemma that Bill and Cathy faced. What a way to entice readers to return to read the next chapter and find out the outcome of that cliff hangar. As usual, Bill doesn't seem as worried as Cathy. However, deep down we know he was. But, he believed his faith would see them through--hopefully.
The cover design is AWESOME, Cathy, as is this chapter.
Thanks Bill and Cathy for sharing.
Respectfully with Love and Admiration. Laura Jan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Bill and Cathy, this is an exciting, adventure packed chapter that I loved reading. Your 'Greeting Friends' does exactly as written. One minute, I'm laughing at Bill's antics; and, the next I'm saddened by the outcomes of parts of the story. Both authors do an exceptional job of keeping their own POV; yet, merging it within the framework of the story.
I like the 'Previously' as it sets the tome of what to expect in this chapter. Readers know that great action and dialogue will follow. They ae reminded about the main characters, too.
This chapter started on a high note. Brett is up to his unusual flirty self as Cathy teased him along. She had his 'number.' However, she is still perplexed if she is handling him in the way God intended.
Readers get a glimpse of how life was out in the country from the hunting for meat on the table nd how 'nature's call' was handled. It was all real. We felt their admiration and love of God's creatures with the inclusion of the momma bear taking care of her little ones. Right before we saw the urgency of the imminent attack by the bear; but, God had other plans. When Cathy prays, her words were sincere and believable.
Bill's flashbacks to his earlier times, both on the farm and school, allowed readers to learn more of his personality. There was great poignancy in describing the funerals of Grandpa's brother and sister. The descriptive words let readers envision it as they occurred. Grandma's announcement to Bill to come to breakfast jars us back to reality. She was a strong-willed woman who showed she was wise beyond her age.
The cave-in of the cave was well-described. In just a few sentences, readers understand the dilemma that Bill and Cathy faced. What a way to entice readers to return to read the next chapter and find out the outcome of that cliff hangar. As usual, Bill doesn't seem as worried as Cathy. However, deep down we know he was. But, he believed his faith would see them through--hopefully.
The cover design is AWESOME, Cathy, as is this chapter.
Thanks Bill and Cathy for sharing.
Respectfully with Love and Admiration. Laura Jan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Happy Easter, Laura Jan! Once again, thanks for the Exceptional review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. It is an honor having an "AWESOME WRITER" (YOU) to express admiration for our presentations. A "SALUTE!" As always, best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Bill & Cathy,
What a MARVELOUS piece of Romance Fiction this is! Of course, in continuation.
Captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end having lucid as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology, WHOLESOME FOOD for heart and mind to keep the both young and energetic.
SUPERB.
[I'm eagerly waiting for the 5th Chapter.]
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Hello Bill & Cathy,
What a MARVELOUS piece of Romance Fiction this is! Of course, in continuation.
Captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end having lucid as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology, WHOLESOME FOOD for heart and mind to keep the both young and energetic.
SUPERB.
[I'm eagerly waiting for the 5th Chapter.]
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Happy Easter, RP! Thanks for the Exceptional review, kind words, and taking the time to read Chapter 4. It is an honor having an awesome writer (YOU) to express admiration for our work. A "SALUTE!" As always, best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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Cathy & Bill, Most Welcome!
with a BIG SALUTE.
Dear Bill, I VERY MUCH like your this style i.e. "SALUTE!"
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Hello, RP! Look . . .a "SALUTE" from Cathy and . . . a "SALUTE" from Me! Thanks for the kind words and support, our dear friend.
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Cathy & Bill, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
