I Got The Blues
Who Took My Shoe?37 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's song was creative, interesting and fun to read too. I liked
it very much. I go to New Orleans a lot and it certainly fits well with the
New Orleans Blues! The song flows and connects well. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
The author's song was creative, interesting and fun to read too. I liked
it very much. I go to New Orleans a lot and it certainly fits well with the
New Orleans Blues! The song flows and connects well. Have a great day!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and kind comments. Have a great day as well my friend.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You made me smile. Where were you when you lost your shoe. Away from home. Oh, oh. That would explain The Missing Shoe Blues. No other explanation for it.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
You made me smile. Where were you when you lost your shoe. Away from home. Oh, oh. That would explain The Missing Shoe Blues. No other explanation for it.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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I am glad this poem made you smile. Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
You had me at the Smurf, what a great concept, I have to get me a Country Smurf! Funnily enough I have a load of the original Smurfs and he would fit perfectly into the band. Very enjoyable, thank you.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
You had me at the Smurf, what a great concept, I have to get me a Country Smurf! Funnily enough I have a load of the original Smurfs and he would fit perfectly into the band. Very enjoyable, thank you.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, I am glad you enjoyed my silly song.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I got the blue reading about you/ your puppy has no clue/what about you?see you inspired me. Thank you for sharing and good luck with contest and with your writings
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
I got the blue reading about you/ your puppy has no clue/what about you?see you inspired me. Thank you for sharing and good luck with contest and with your writings
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, kind comments and best wishes.
I am glad you enjoyed my silly song.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Whimsical--we need a light touch these days. Clever idea--do you realize you gave us a bonus: all four lines rhyme in the last verse! Some of the rhythm and rhymes seem forced re flow and word choice. Overall effect is cheerful and amusing. Do you have music to this. Adorable pic too! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
Whimsical--we need a light touch these days. Clever idea--do you realize you gave us a bonus: all four lines rhyme in the last verse! Some of the rhythm and rhymes seem forced re flow and word choice. Overall effect is cheerful and amusing. Do you have music to this. Adorable pic too! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, and kind comment. I am glad you enjoyed this silly song.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Craigitar
I was captivated by the story of the missing shoe. As each verse and then the chorus told of the shoe, I realized the mystery of its missing would not be revealed--it is the 'Blues' after all. Good writing--made me smile. Luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
I was captivated by the story of the missing shoe. As each verse and then the chorus told of the shoe, I realized the mystery of its missing would not be revealed--it is the 'Blues' after all. Good writing--made me smile. Luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, kind comments and best wishes. I am glad you enjoyed this silly song.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from lauralumummu
The thrill is gone without those shoes. A really cute poem/ blues ditty. I like it and the picture. Good luck with the contest. All the best Laura.-----------
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
The thrill is gone without those shoes. A really cute poem/ blues ditty. I like it and the picture. Good luck with the contest. All the best Laura.-----------
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the "A Humorous Song" contest.
This little verse is indeed humorous.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
I think this is a good entry for the "A Humorous Song" contest.
This little verse is indeed humorous.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Sharon,
Thanks so much for your review, kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have certainly met the prompt requirements. Your song is poetic, charming, and amusing. It flows right along, through the mystery of the missing shoe to the culprit's identity.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
You have certainly met the prompt requirements. Your song is poetic, charming, and amusing. It flows right along, through the mystery of the missing shoe to the culprit's identity.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and kind comments.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Raul1
I also wonder what happened to that blue shoe? Kidding! Very humorous poem. I like the poetry in that song. Excellent work! Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
I also wonder what happened to that blue shoe? Kidding! Very humorous poem. I like the poetry in that song. Excellent work! Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...Portia