Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Well I think this is clever as it can be. You describe Sir Sean in his own words. That's a classy way to do it. I even like your use of the word "flavoured" to describe him. My only suggest would be to capitalize the word 'bonds' in the second line.
Good job. I think this one should do well.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020

Thank you and I have, many thanks

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great entry in the contest, Mystery Author. I love the ol' timey look of the black & white image and the super picture you chose. Great job with the syllable count per line, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020

Thank you very much

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Very witty wordplay re flavoured vs the expected favoured--thought it was a typo till I saw the punchline. I needed a smile--we all do these days. Thanks for supplying! Cheers. LIZ

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020

Thank you very much and yes it is good to smile