Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

I like your monorhyme and the suggestion that hope can tease us with out faith. We cannot control its ups and downs; it's there or it isn't. But when it's there, we can ride life's breezes.

I enjoyed your poem.

Patricia

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020

Thanks for the insightful review. Wrote this so long ago, cheers, j

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a lovely little poem and an excellent contest entry. You chose quite a striking picture to complement the piece. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020

Thanks for the review Susan. Seems like a lifetime ago I wrote this one, cheers, j

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I find this line quite "capricioasa" hope hints and teases
with faith, comes as it pleases ~how madame Hope dares to show up only when she feels like it, when she needs to be here every second;) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020

Thanks for the insightful review. Yes, I need her near always, cheers,j