Action
A 5-7-5 poem15 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading you contest entry. Your entry is in great form. The syllable count is correct per line, the art is a good pairing, and your words have a great, and true, message. I agree that we must act responsibly and not say one thing (prayers) and act another way. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed reading you contest entry. Your entry is in great form. The syllable count is correct per line, the art is a good pairing, and your words have a great, and true, message. I agree that we must act responsibly and not say one thing (prayers) and act another way. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your helpful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write, if only people would remember their neighbours in this time of need, I have witnessed some terrible tragic events recently with this world chaos, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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A poignant write, if only people would remember their neighbours in this time of need, I have witnessed some terrible tragic events recently with this world chaos, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you and yes it seems to be sending people into chaotic mode, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables to convey a powerful message about prayer--and ACTIONS that should come with them (when a person is able to act). Actually "prayer" is one syllable--dictionary.com.
We don't say "pray---er."
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables to convey a powerful message about prayer--and ACTIONS that should come with them (when a person is able to act). Actually "prayer" is one syllable--dictionary.com.
We don't say "pray---er."
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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OOps! my bad, thank you for your help and encouraging review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from samandlancelot
I love the connection you made with Jesus' tomb and the action we must take for hope to prevail. Sometimes it's time we give to someone who has questions. Sometimes the action is simple to make a difference.
Excellent presentation and message.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I love the connection you made with Jesus' tomb and the action we must take for hope to prevail. Sometimes it's time we give to someone who has questions. Sometimes the action is simple to make a difference.
Excellent presentation and message.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the message conveyed in this. The Bible declares that faith without works is dead, being left alone. You've summed that scripture up beautifully. I like what you've presented here and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work.! Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I love the message conveyed in this. The Bible declares that faith without works is dead, being left alone. You've summed that scripture up beautifully. I like what you've presented here and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work.! Well done!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Minglement
This is a very nice entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt. Beautifully presented, it does carry the message of hope, but also the message that there are things we need to do, not just sit and wait. One question - when you say prayer's redemption, do you mean prayer's to be possessive of redemption, or just plural. If you mean prayers, plural, there is no hyphen. Good luc kin the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is a very nice entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt. Beautifully presented, it does carry the message of hope, but also the message that there are things we need to do, not just sit and wait. One question - when you say prayer's redemption, do you mean prayer's to be possessive of redemption, or just plural. If you mean prayers, plural, there is no hyphen. Good luc kin the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, I now understand and have corrected
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My pleasure.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A 5-7-5 poem
Action
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful 5/7/5 hope poem entry for the contest. The presentation is very nice. The connection between lines is strong facilitating flow. Well done.
gypsy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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A 5-7-5 poem
Action
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful 5/7/5 hope poem entry for the contest. The presentation is very nice. The connection between lines is strong facilitating flow. Well done.
gypsy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think part is this is also listening. Sometimes when we pray the answer isn't handed to us. Or it is and we're too busy to see or hear the answer. You did a great job
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I think part is this is also listening. Sometimes when we pray the answer isn't handed to us. Or it is and we're too busy to see or hear the answer. You did a great job
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Yes, actions do speak louder than words, sometimes. But prayer and action together are a powerful force. Heeding guidelines is the wise way to go and holding on to a faith that we will prevail, is essential.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Yes, actions do speak louder than words, sometimes. But prayer and action together are a powerful force. Heeding guidelines is the wise way to go and holding on to a faith that we will prevail, is essential.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like the picture you choose, it looks like Sisif took upon itself to show us how we can deal with the hardships of life - action must compete
with prayer's of redemption.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I like the picture you choose, it looks like Sisif took upon itself to show us how we can deal with the hardships of life - action must compete
with prayer's of redemption.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
