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Where Do We Find Joy?

We all search for it.

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Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Mike, this is a very touching read. Each paragraph dedicated to different segments of joy. Joy that is all around us in our everyday lives, without looking too hard.
I like how you have titled each point with the thing that gives you joy.

Just a comment on this line in the - Planting Seeds.

She touches the florets in the center then looks the yellow pollen the tip of her finger.

Do you mean to say...

She touches the florets in the center then looks (at) the yellow pollen (on) the tip of her finger.

Thank you for sharing this uplifting and most enjoyable read. ~DD

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend. This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words and for your help with this story!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Cool about those "emerald" eyes (my faux surname!) So, I'm already biased in your favor. Love the bit about Stephie's lack of interest in getting down and dirty--I loathe yardwork myself! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend. This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Yes, to think on pleasant and good things will help in times of trouble and fear. Joy begins in the heart. You came up with four good mini-stories proving the point. Good post!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend. This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 23-Mar-2020
    You have skills you need to let the world see.
Comment from lauralumummu
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This is lovely, we must take joy in these wonderful moments. Your love and your heart shine through with this encouraging piece. God bless you and yours, Laura.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend. This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Lovely write Papamike and thanks for sharing with us the special things that make you smile and bring joy to your heart. I think some that are outright now stripping supermarket shelves could do with stopping and thinking about something simple like a smile to share.
Enjoyed,
cheers

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend. This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Shirley McLain
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You did a fine job writing about what puts joy in your life. We should all do that so we are not overcome with all the bad. I did not find one mistake. Shirley

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend. This is something new for me and I love to write them. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from royowen
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I heard that a preacher who hails from South Africa, but is stationed in America, predicted this pandemic in 2016, he said it would end as mysteriously as it appeared, but return ten years later. His name is Rodney Howard-Brown, Also some mystic, gather your faith bro. Pray against it. Well done, beautifully written, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend. My wife and I were talking about the next one to hit. What frightened me was the mass panic in America. We saw a different side of people then. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
reply by royowen on 23-Mar-2020
    Great time to witness Mike, here too, people behaving the proverbial deer in the headlights.
Comment from Sally Law
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How rich you are, Papa. A happy heart has a continual feast. It's true. We are much alike. I find my joy in the simple things although these days writing gives me as much or greater joy than reading. Who would have dreamed of such a thing? Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hi, Sally. I was in Wal-Mart yesterday shocking the crap out of people by wishing them a good day and actually smiling. It was stunning. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from estory
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This format is really innovative and interesting, I liked how you created these little interrelated vignettes of hope and love. The eyes of your wife, the man helping out with a charity drive, the child planting her first garden; all these are images of hope in action. Love in action. There's also a great sublimity to the tone, an inner peace that radiates from these scenes. A tranquility. estory

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend! I think I've stumbled onto something in this new form of mine. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Learning the story in a new phase of activities, it is a joy indeed, it is true we all search for a better way for happiness, and we change in our modes of activities, but how many are there, repetition comes, somewhere to stop; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this; you may gift me any amount $ MD to help me make a premier shield member, for my happiness.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Hello, my friend. This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thankss for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike