Where Do We Find Joy?
We all search for it.25 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is perfectly done, especially for these trying times. But anytime is a good time for a feel-good post. This is very well written, I can see nothing I would change or add to make it better. I like the headings on each paragraph, that speak together, in order, the message of "Where do we find joy?" Well done, and Bravo! Fortunately, I am not gripped with fear over this crisis but, rather, restless with a need to get outside and enjoy nature's beauty all around where I live in Northern California. In your author's notes, I like the hopeful way you end, with the phrase, "We live in amazing times." That is one way of looking at it that is positive. Thank you for that, and for this story.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
This is perfectly done, especially for these trying times. But anytime is a good time for a feel-good post. This is very well written, I can see nothing I would change or add to make it better. I like the headings on each paragraph, that speak together, in order, the message of "Where do we find joy?" Well done, and Bravo! Fortunately, I am not gripped with fear over this crisis but, rather, restless with a need to get outside and enjoy nature's beauty all around where I live in Northern California. In your author's notes, I like the hopeful way you end, with the phrase, "We live in amazing times." That is one way of looking at it that is positive. Thank you for that, and for this story.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I also refuse to bow down to this fear! Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Hello Mike.
You're welcome. I'm glad you liked my review. Your uplifting post has never been more needed than now. Have a good day, and stay safe.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Bichon
I liked how this story piece was split up into different sections, it made for a pleasant and easy read. The positivity was a nice change in mood due to recent times!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
I liked how this story piece was split up into different sections, it made for a pleasant and easy read. The positivity was a nice change in mood due to recent times!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is something new for me, and I've enjoyed writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from MamaBebop
Mike,
You brought more than a little joy to my day, my dear man. What a lovely idea to write these tiny jewels into a day for us to read. Each one brought a smile to my face( and possibly a tear to my eye). You are an incredible author!! I loved every moment.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless and hope you are well.
Beth
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
Mike,
You brought more than a little joy to my day, my dear man. What a lovely idea to write these tiny jewels into a day for us to read. Each one brought a smile to my face( and possibly a tear to my eye). You are an incredible author!! I loved every moment.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless and hope you are well.
Beth
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I think I've stumbled onto something in this new form of writing of mine. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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I think so too!! Keep 'me coming!!
Stay well.
Beth
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I always wanted to get an eye tattoo'd on me. I think eyes are so amazing. They can tell a person exactly how you're feeling if the other person knows you well enough. How amazing is that. We can find joy in so many things. I've been off with a broken foot. I've started reading books, doing puzzles, etc. There is so much I just never had the time to do. It's been kind of amazing. There has only been a couple boring moments, but it's actually been quite nice.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
I always wanted to get an eye tattoo'd on me. I think eyes are so amazing. They can tell a person exactly how you're feeling if the other person knows you well enough. How amazing is that. We can find joy in so many things. I've been off with a broken foot. I've started reading books, doing puzzles, etc. There is so much I just never had the time to do. It's been kind of amazing. There has only been a couple boring moments, but it's actually been quite nice.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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A break from everything is always nice. This is something for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It brought more than a little joy into my day, my friend. What a lovely idea to write these gems down this way for us to read. Each one brought a smile to my face. You are an incredible author, my friend. I loved this. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
It brought more than a little joy into my day, my friend. What a lovely idea to write these gems down this way for us to read. Each one brought a smile to my face. You are an incredible author, my friend. I loved this. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from nancy_e_davis
These are all happy times, Mike. Planting seeds was my favorite. Spending time with the young is always a good way to enjoy the day. Children are such a blessing and need to learn the good things in life not the bad. Good job. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
These are all happy times, Mike. Planting seeds was my favorite. Spending time with the young is always a good way to enjoy the day. Children are such a blessing and need to learn the good things in life not the bad. Good job. Nancy:)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hi, Nancy! This is something for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Puzzle
This is a great piece. Very pertinent to what is going on right now. We all need to look for joy in the simple things. I try to find joy when I cook or when I do my job at school. Now that I'm home I'm taking this opportunity to spend time with my family
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
This is a great piece. Very pertinent to what is going on right now. We all need to look for joy in the simple things. I try to find joy when I cook or when I do my job at school. Now that I'm home I'm taking this opportunity to spend time with my family
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello, my friend! This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like the innocence of your ending, by springing hope with that small flower and the lovely whisper of "She touches the florets in the center then looks the yellow pollen the tip of her finger. Gently rubbing the bright pink petals, she slowly turns to me with a beautiful smile. "I love you, Papa."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
I like the innocence of your ending, by springing hope with that small flower and the lovely whisper of "She touches the florets in the center then looks the yellow pollen the tip of her finger. Gently rubbing the bright pink petals, she slowly turns to me with a beautiful smile. "I love you, Papa."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello, my friend! This is something new for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from George Anderson
Thank you for posting this, Mike. This was very beautiful to read. I'm not sure which one was my favorite. I liked the first one how you described the eyes of the wife. But I think I liked Reading the most.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
Thank you for posting this, Mike. This was very beautiful to read. I'm not sure which one was my favorite. I liked the first one how you described the eyes of the wife. But I think I liked Reading the most.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello, my friend. This is something for me and I love writing them. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from jenintorre
This is truly wonderful. I love it. The last line made me cry as it reminded me so much of the love that I receive from my grandchildren. 5here is nothing like it. Pure joy. Stay safe. Jen.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
This is truly wonderful. I love it. The last line made me cry as it reminded me so much of the love that I receive from my grandchildren. 5here is nothing like it. Pure joy. Stay safe. Jen.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I think I've stumbled onto something with this new form of mine. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike