You have the Power
To make a difference giving us all hope!41 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you made a great post. It is well written and very relatable. We need poems like this to get through challenging times. Thank you for the advice in the poem as well. Great poem!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I think that you made a great post. It is well written and very relatable. We need poems like this to get through challenging times. Thank you for the advice in the poem as well. Great poem!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Jefferey, I do very much appreciate your reviews and comments, High fives back my friend!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very practical poem about hope and what we can all do to help and try to stay safe and alive during the corona virus outbreak. You used very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is a very well written and very practical poem about hope and what we can all do to help and try to stay safe and alive during the corona virus outbreak. You used very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, teri
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Teri, my friend, I appreciate your reviews and comments. My prayer for you is that you find acceptance and extra endurance during these fitful days.
Comment from Raul1
Thanks for the important message. We will be sure to follow it. Excellent work! Well written. No grammatical errors. Nice job. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thanks for the important message. We will be sure to follow it. Excellent work! Well written. No grammatical errors. Nice job. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Raul, thanks!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Drew Delaney
Real good advice here. Use soap and water. People are upset there is no more hand sanitizer, but really just plain soap and water is the best. Also, yes we must confine ourselves so we are not carriers and pass the bug on. Good poem writing.
Drew
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Real good advice here. Use soap and water. People are upset there is no more hand sanitizer, but really just plain soap and water is the best. Also, yes we must confine ourselves so we are not carriers and pass the bug on. Good poem writing.
Drew
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Drew, I very much appreciate your review and reflection.
Comment from amada
I read with much interest your poem in the subject of hope. I liked the first stanza the best. I confess. Your words are strong and show strenght of conviction. Very well done, poet.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I read with much interest your poem in the subject of hope. I liked the first stanza the best. I confess. Your words are strong and show strenght of conviction. Very well done, poet.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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amada, I appreciate you review and comments and my prayer for you is that you find acceptance and extra endurance during these fitful days.
Comment from Minglement
This entry for the Hope Writing prompt certainly embodies the spirit of the challenge. You've penned a lovely write reinforcing some great advice but most of all hope that 'This too shall pass'. Thank you. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This entry for the Hope Writing prompt certainly embodies the spirit of the challenge. You've penned a lovely write reinforcing some great advice but most of all hope that 'This too shall pass'. Thank you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Minglement, thank you for your review and comments. I appreciate your reviews and comments. My prayer for you is that you find acceptance and extra endurance during these fitful days.
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My pleasure and thank you for your prayers.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. I commend you for your positive poem about scary and ubiquitous situation. I like your practical dialogue. Your voice is very clear in this poem and I wish you well in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Hello mystery writer. I commend you for your positive poem about scary and ubiquitous situation. I like your practical dialogue. Your voice is very clear in this poem and I wish you well in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Robert, thank you for your validation.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, certainly a timely write, and the inclusion of sound advice is both relevant and important, as a reminder of our positions and responsibilities, both to ourselves and others...
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, certainly a timely write, and the inclusion of sound advice is both relevant and important, as a reminder of our positions and responsibilities, both to ourselves and others...
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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eve, thank you for your validation and be safe, but do not stop from singing and dancing this will pass!
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You are very welcome, and thank you for your uplifting advice...Eve
Comment from royowen
Of course these are things that surround us all day on the media. It will be very interesting to see how society handles. in the recent past I've been writing about, not worrying about tomorrow, the present time has its own worry, beautifully written my friend, in excellent rhyming verse, well done, excellent advice, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Of course these are things that surround us all day on the media. It will be very interesting to see how society handles. in the recent past I've been writing about, not worrying about tomorrow, the present time has its own worry, beautifully written my friend, in excellent rhyming verse, well done, excellent advice, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Roy, This is, in my lifetime, the first worldwide event that truly effects mankind. Perhaps this might just end up moving the social conscience level of the worlds population to a higher God centered reality, which if this does happens then this is a good test.
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I think you?re right my friend, for me also, perhaps an enforced ?trench? experience.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about having hope despite any threats that may harm us in so many ways. Do whatever you can to stay healthy and practice good hygiene and be prepared for the worse scenario.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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A very well-written poem about having hope despite any threats that may harm us in so many ways. Do whatever you can to stay healthy and practice good hygiene and be prepared for the worse scenario.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Sandra, Be well, stay healthy and happy, this too shall pass!
