Comment from Pam (respa)

Exceptional

-Great artwork and
nice presentation.
-I agree with your note
and appreciate you sharing it.
-This is an excellent poem
that expresses heartfelt
feelings about the good
times and the troubling ones.
-The repeating line is excellent.
-The imagery is so vivid, and I
like how you open the poem.
-Good transition to when the clouds appear.
-The last verse is excellent, as well:
"The storm will end, the wind will cease,
as rain-filled clouds no longer weep."
-I appreciate you sharing this; it
has touched my heart, and I am
sure it will touch others, too.
-Best of luck in the contest, and
thank you for your beautiful words.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

So glad you enjoyed this piece! In view of the current challenges we face, I felt the need to stay positive. Thank you for the generous rating!

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Mar-2020

You are very welcome and deserving, and I am glad you did stay positive. We need as much of that as possible.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

I loved the philosophy in these words, the rhyming and meter and your words are uplifting and subtle, this is a joy to read and worthy of a six, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thank you! With the mood of the world right now focusing on the negative, I felt like being positive instead. I appreciate the generous rating!