Fear Not the Wind
A Kyrielle for the Repetition Contest12 total reviews
Comment from lauralumummu
I love this one. Good luck in the contest. You have written a very inspiring uplifting poem. The picture is perfect. Things will change. God bless you, keep well, Laura.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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I love this one. Good luck in the contest. You have written a very inspiring uplifting poem. The picture is perfect. Things will change. God bless you, keep well, Laura.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Repetition writing prompt.
This verse tells a clear story of deep roots and survival while repeating lines.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Repetition writing prompt.
This verse tells a clear story of deep roots and survival while repeating lines.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from pharp
Mystery Poet,
Your have penned a beautiful poem with a very uplifting message.
Excellent rhyming throughout, with a very smooth flow. Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Mystery Poet,
Your have penned a beautiful poem with a very uplifting message.
Excellent rhyming throughout, with a very smooth flow. Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation, Mystery Author. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and the repeated line fits in seamlessly. The art choice is beautiful and fitting for your well-chosen words. Your notes sum it up well, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is a great presentation, Mystery Author. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and the repeated line fits in seamlessly. The art choice is beautiful and fitting for your well-chosen words. Your notes sum it up well, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Struggling is living; if you have power to live righteously, if your mission and aim for living is clear and fixed, if you work despite oddities, you will achieve success; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Struggling is living; if you have power to live righteously, if your mission and aim for living is clear and fixed, if you work despite oddities, you will achieve success; well said, well done.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Puzzle
This was really pretty. I read it and related it to myself. Basically I've been through a lot but since I have a strong family and I am a strong person I could get through anything. This is well written. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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This was really pretty. I read it and related it to myself. Basically I've been through a lot but since I have a strong family and I am a strong person I could get through anything. This is well written. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you! Thank you for dropping by.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from dmt1967
This is a nice poem and an enlightening one. The world is not as we know it at the moment and we need poems like this to keep the spirit up. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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This is a nice poem and an enlightening one. The world is not as we know it at the moment and we need poems like this to keep the spirit up. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Well done. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. I like: fear not the wind if roots are deep. Also: clouds no longer weep. IS this meant to offer hope in these scary times or did you write this pre-Corona? Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Well done. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. I like: fear not the wind if roots are deep. Also: clouds no longer weep. IS this meant to offer hope in these scary times or did you write this pre-Corona? Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. We need to stay positive these days.
Comment from Drew Delaney
A wise and well written poem. We are all in a stew right at the moment but let's have the faith as a grain of a mustard seed. A good entry for the contest.
Drew
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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A wise and well written poem. We are all in a stew right at the moment but let's have the faith as a grain of a mustard seed. A good entry for the contest.
Drew
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insightful comments!
