We Walk This Road as One
A Love Story Sonnet51 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
This sounds like a great love poem for the contest. It seems even better that you wrote this for your life long friends when he had a heart attack.
It is well written and easy fo follow. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This sounds like a great love poem for the contest. It seems even better that you wrote this for your life long friends when he had a heart attack.
It is well written and easy fo follow. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you Patty for this wonderful review.
I talked to Jim a few days ago and he is doing very well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from estory
Nice job handling the meter and rhyme scheme of this sonnet, I think you articulated this great sense of overcoming the storms and nights of life together, sharing the ups and downs, coming through the struggles stronger and with more character, with deeper love than before. estory
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Nice job handling the meter and rhyme scheme of this sonnet, I think you articulated this great sense of overcoming the storms and nights of life together, sharing the ups and downs, coming through the struggles stronger and with more character, with deeper love than before. estory
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review.
I talked to Jim a few days ago and he is doing very well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is such a kind and generous thing to do for your friend. I am sure she was speechless when given the poem that as you say exemplifies their lives. How well-composed and gentle your words.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is such a kind and generous thing to do for your friend. I am sure she was speechless when given the poem that as you say exemplifies their lives. How well-composed and gentle your words.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you Raffaelina for this wonderful review.
I talked to Jim a few days ago and he is doing very well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great expression of a strong commitment with genuine love that has stood the test of time through many trials in this life. Thanks for sharing this creative writing about your friends. Bill
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Great expression of a strong commitment with genuine love that has stood the test of time through many trials in this life. Thanks for sharing this creative writing about your friends. Bill
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you Bill for this wonderful review.
I talked to Jim a few days ago and he is doing very well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jenintorre
I am sure Ingrid and Jim really appreciate you writing this beautiful poem for them and will treasure it. I really enjoyed reading it. Take care. Jen.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I am sure Ingrid and Jim really appreciate you writing this beautiful poem for them and will treasure it. I really enjoyed reading it. Take care. Jen.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you Jen for this wonderful review.
I talked to Jim a few days ago and he is doing very well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Janet.
-I appreciate your notes,
and am glad to hear
your friend is doing well.
-A well written poem that
shows your bond with
these special friends.
-I like the idea of
"walking the road as one."
-I like the ending, as we all
have obstacles to face as we
age, but the important thing
is doing it with dignity.
-Thanks for sharing this;
I'm sure your friends will
appreciate it very much.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation, Janet.
-I appreciate your notes,
and am glad to hear
your friend is doing well.
-A well written poem that
shows your bond with
these special friends.
-I like the idea of
"walking the road as one."
-I like the ending, as we all
have obstacles to face as we
age, but the important thing
is doing it with dignity.
-Thanks for sharing this;
I'm sure your friends will
appreciate it very much.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Pam for this wonderful review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome, Janet, and I am very glad to hear Jim is doing great.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a lovely Sonnet about two people sharing their lives together as one. The artwork is beautiful, with bright colors accenting the beauty of their love for each other. The flow is smooth, the rhymes are well chosen. I especially like the two rhymes, "foresee" and "dignity." If I could make one suggestion or rather a query, it would be in the second stanza the second line, the first word, is it meant to say "though?" or was it meant to say 'through?' I am not sure, but I thought I would point it out in case it is a typo that you can easily fix. My mistake if "though" is what you meant. I love the feeling of tenderness expressed in this. And I appreciate the author's note and update on Jim's condition. Thank you for telling the love story of friends of yours. They are very lucky indeed.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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This is a lovely Sonnet about two people sharing their lives together as one. The artwork is beautiful, with bright colors accenting the beauty of their love for each other. The flow is smooth, the rhymes are well chosen. I especially like the two rhymes, "foresee" and "dignity." If I could make one suggestion or rather a query, it would be in the second stanza the second line, the first word, is it meant to say "though?" or was it meant to say 'through?' I am not sure, but I thought I would point it out in case it is a typo that you can easily fix. My mistake if "though" is what you meant. I love the feeling of tenderness expressed in this. And I appreciate the author's note and update on Jim's condition. Thank you for telling the love story of friends of yours. They are very lucky indeed.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Jesse for this wonderful and detailed review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome, Janet.
I am glad you liked my review. And I'm happy for your friend, who is doing great.
Stay safe.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we spend a lifetime with our partner we just cannot imagine life without them. Your sonnet is well worded and rhymes with a smooth meter and a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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When we spend a lifetime with our partner we just cannot imagine life without them. Your sonnet is well worded and rhymes with a smooth meter and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Dolly for this wonderful review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
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I am so glad to hear that Janet, thank you for letting me know x x x
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"We Walk This Road as One", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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"We Walk This Road as One", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Duchess for this wonderful review. I always appreciate hearing from you. A virtual six from you is an honor.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
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Janet, a true six would have been preferable.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from June Sargent
What a lovely gift you have created for your friend! This is a wonderful tribute to a love that has lasted over 50 years. When two lives become entwined over time, their hearts beat as one. I'm glad to hear that he is doing well. Thank you for sharing these beautiful sentiments.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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What a lovely gift you have created for your friend! This is a wonderful tribute to a love that has lasted over 50 years. When two lives become entwined over time, their hearts beat as one. I'm glad to hear that he is doing well. Thank you for sharing these beautiful sentiments.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you June for this wonderful review and the special sixth star. I always appreciate hearing from you.
I talked to Jim last night and he is doing great.
Blessings
Janet
