Memories Remembered
Reminiscing72 total reviews
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your poetry was so well received.
I loved the way you expressed yourself. It was as if I was reliving your memories of yesterday.
You made me think of my past, trials and successes.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Your poetry was so well received.
I loved the way you expressed yourself. It was as if I was reliving your memories of yesterday.
You made me think of my past, trials and successes.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hi Lil' Mormon Boy, thank you for a wonderful review....I so glad you like it...as I get older I find myself looking back on what once was...thank you...and you are so welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Excellent sentiments pertaining to our memories. I thought your poem flowed nicely and reminds the reader that even those mistakes that we made in our past helped form us into who we are today. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Excellent sentiments pertaining to our memories. I thought your poem flowed nicely and reminds the reader that even those mistakes that we made in our past helped form us into who we are today. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Hi Frank, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Susan Larson
being "like a mannequin of moments" reflecting on memories, both memories unwanted, never to be relived and those so tightly treasured
seen only as pure gold, that made you who you are...one insightful enough to look back with such introspective thoughts.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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being "like a mannequin of moments" reflecting on memories, both memories unwanted, never to be relived and those so tightly treasured
seen only as pure gold, that made you who you are...one insightful enough to look back with such introspective thoughts.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Hi Susan, so good to see you sweet girl...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from joycetreasures
J.Raven
This is a lovely poem. The title, "Memories Remembered" you chose is nice. We all have memories, good and bad. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I found no needed revisions. It was an easy read and very touching. Many can share your sediments in this poem.
Stanza 1 - Pondering life
Stanza 2 - Your memories are forever
Stanza 3 - Forgetting unwanted memories and certain ones will never be relived again. I have a few of those.
Stanza 4 - I think we all wonder if we could have done things differently in our life. Especially whether we forgave as much as we should have.
Stanza 5 - Like you, I wonder doing my life's journey if my actions were fair or unfair. No matter what, I also smile.
Keep writing:-)
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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J.Raven
This is a lovely poem. The title, "Memories Remembered" you chose is nice. We all have memories, good and bad. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I found no needed revisions. It was an easy read and very touching. Many can share your sediments in this poem.
Stanza 1 - Pondering life
Stanza 2 - Your memories are forever
Stanza 3 - Forgetting unwanted memories and certain ones will never be relived again. I have a few of those.
Stanza 4 - I think we all wonder if we could have done things differently in our life. Especially whether we forgave as much as we should have.
Stanza 5 - Like you, I wonder doing my life's journey if my actions were fair or unfair. No matter what, I also smile.
Keep writing:-)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hi Joyce, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...
and all your lovely stars...as I get older I find myself looking back on what once was...sigh...thank you...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Very beautifully written free verse poem. These are definitely the questions we all ponder on. I love the accompanying picture. Definitely reflect the contemplative energy of your poem! :) xoxo
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Very beautifully written free verse poem. These are definitely the questions we all ponder on. I love the accompanying picture. Definitely reflect the contemplative energy of your poem! :) xoxo
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Hi Diane, thank you so much for a wonderful review sweet girl...
I am so glad you like it...God Bless...and smiling back at you...love you...Linda xxoo
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This is so my kind of poem! My pleasure to read! xoxo
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smiling big...thank you...xxoo love
Comment from TPAC
A powerful statement, captivating views of interests inspiring to at least my spirit, displaying well penned descriptive conveyances quenching my thirst. Well spoken in my opinion of this particular read.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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A powerful statement, captivating views of interests inspiring to at least my spirit, displaying well penned descriptive conveyances quenching my thirst. Well spoken in my opinion of this particular read.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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HI TPAC, so good to see you my sweet friend...thank you so much for a wonderful review...and all the shinning stars...as I get older...I find myself looking back on what once was...and hoping I did it right...thank you again sweet guy...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Aussie
A mannequin of moments; like that line. Except mannequins can't talk - you can! When we reach a certain age, our minds do wander back to better times or even times we really don't want to remember, wish we could change. There is only One Judge of what we have done, the only thing is do your best and love one another as He first loved us. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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A mannequin of moments; like that line. Except mannequins can't talk - you can! When we reach a certain age, our minds do wander back to better times or even times we really don't want to remember, wish we could change. There is only One Judge of what we have done, the only thing is do your best and love one another as He first loved us. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hi Kace, you wonderful bundle of joy...and thank you for a wonderful review you...and all the shinning stars...lately I seem to be looking back on what was once...hoping I got it right...thinking of things I did...and if they were the right things...hmmmmmmm...thank you Sweetie Pie...your a angel...love you...Linda xxoo
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G'day possum! Keep washing hands. Our fast food outlets are refusing entry and will deliver instead. Bun fights still going on with panic buying. I think Trump is doing the right thing. This is very serious. Aust. virologists have a break-through on a vaccine, need tons of cash for a human testing. We have 454 people infected, Tom Hanks and wife have been in hospital here. He is such a nice person. Has really taken to eating our Vegemite on toast! I canceled the eye surgery. Not going into hospital now. Bad times ahead, besides, I can see and read OK and it's not urgent - they pushed me to sign in the first place. Love 2U my dear friend. Much love, K & Toby XX
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Hi Kace, we have pretty much the same thing...except Tom Hanks and his wife...lol...
and I think President Trump is doing a great job...but I think some of the things are to much...people here are being laid off...and unless he has money put in the banks of all these people being laid off today...this is going to hurt a lot of people...my niece was just laid off for 30 days...she can't afford that...she lives from week to week...and others around here are being laid off...
I understand what he is doing...he is waiting for the vaccine to come out...and that's wonderful...but there will be people who can't get them...allergies...and some that just won't...it's a virus...and like all the flu's and viruses we deal with...we have to get immune to them...before this one came along...the flu's and viruses we have now...have killed about 69 thousand people a year...every year...
China has already closed all but one of the hospitals they put up for the virus...no more people are coming in...most who got it will be immune to it...or not get it s bad next time around...or not at all...
it is a bad virus...but as the years go by...they are going to get worse...one tries to get stronger than the other...we have to put it in God's hands and know He will protect us...that's what He wants...lets just all pray...well see what happens...love you much too...kiss Toby dog for me...stay safe beautiful girl...xxoo
from what I am seeing and hearing people with it are saying they aren't having real bad reactions from...no mire than other viruses...it is older people and mostly those with underlined illnesses...most are healing from it....
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"Fear, the only way out is through." The rising death toll is causing a lot of fear. We are trialling a antivirus on humans right now. In some ways, it is a culling. Just like when we cull too many animals. I just wish they wouldn't cull the toilet rolls! Yes, we must look to the Lord for He makes the final decisions. I am medically frail (age, diabetes etc) and what is worse, we are movinging into winter with influenza hovering. The people that have died (mostly) have been frail and in nursing homes (I think) I pray that the World leaders will join hands, you never know, this may bring peace. I am with Trump - China is the source. Much love my dear, dear friend. I look for your letters. Love, Toby (cheeky boy) and me (old fart!) XXXX
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Linda,
Lovely to read your poems again.
I feel the weight of the issues you have raised on a personal level as I cast my mind and thoughts back over my own life.
Dear friend this means your words and meaning are powerful and shared by others.
Very nicely told.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hi Linda,
Lovely to read your poems again.
I feel the weight of the issues you have raised on a personal level as I cast my mind and thoughts back over my own life.
Dear friend this means your words and meaning are powerful and shared by others.
Very nicely told.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hi Shirley, so good to see you my sweet friend...thank you for a wonderful review...as I get older...I find myself looking back on what once was...and wondering if I did it right...but I think I did good...there were some ups and downs...but they made me who I am...thank you sweet girl...and Blessings to you as well...love you...Linda xxoo
I had to have some eye surgery...so the doctor said I can read a little...one eye healed...the other is still fighting me...LOL...but it will be ok...love xxoo
Comment from Aphthong
Beautifully crafted poem.. We are all living on a huge baggage of past memories and with a vivid imaginative power.. Past doings can't be changed.. Future is waiting..
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Beautifully crafted poem.. We are all living on a huge baggage of past memories and with a vivid imaginative power.. Past doings can't be changed.. Future is waiting..
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hi Aphthong, thank you for a wonderful review...and you are so very right...the future is waiting...thank you...love Linda xxoo
I see you are new on the FanStory...welcome to our family...if I can help you with anything...let me know...xxoo
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hello, what a lovely work. I think the picture is awesome. Adds such a great initial mood for the poem. I saw no errors, and this is my sort of poem, not sing-songy and over worked. It flows and touches the heart. Cheers, and thanks for sharing your writing, Eve.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hello, what a lovely work. I think the picture is awesome. Adds such a great initial mood for the poem. I saw no errors, and this is my sort of poem, not sing-songy and over worked. It flows and touches the heart. Cheers, and thanks for sharing your writing, Eve.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hi Eve, thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...I'm so glad you like it my friend...and you are so welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
