Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Great chapter! The detective scene was a nail biter. I thought the hooded guy might be Joesph. It keep me on the edge of my seat.
The scene with Joseph and the werewolf was great. I thought they were going to battle it out.
Your Shadow is very mysterious.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and you like the Shadow. It's fun bringing out the dark side and creating a new villain for my series. I hope to hear from you again! Your feedback matters.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

A truly exceptional chapter. I love how beautifully it's all working out. The mystery, the relationships, the beginnings of the entire plot. Read really well.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

This book is fun to write so far. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm having fun using my imagination to come up with new characters and new supernatural beings.

I hope to keep you entertained. That is the greatest reward I get.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 16-Mar-2020

You certainly keep me entertained. I look forward with anticipation to learning more about your new characters.
Hugs,
Faye

reply by fm wright on 16-Mar-2020

You certainly keep me entertained. I look forward with anticipation to learning more about your new characters.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Another thrilling chapter, Ms Shana. I really enjoyed the scene where the Shadow came face to face with the wolfish creature. At first, I thought he was going to kill her. I wasn't expecting her to turn into that. Great writing as always. Love your Breedline stories!

Nate

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

Thank you, Nate :)

So glad you liked the chapter and the scene. It was fun to create! Hope to keep you entertained with my Breedline adventures. More to come!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

An excellent episode dear Shana, Carrie, however has been discovered, because Joseph has discovered her purse while in the place where the two attackers have been devoured by the wolffish creature. But Carrie has been in touch with her Uncle Frank, and along with Manuel they'll figure it out. Wonderful episode dear girl, blessings, Roy
Typo : You're working to(o) many late nights.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

Thanks dear friend :)

So thrilled you liked this chapter. Now you know Carrie is the girl that Joseph is stalking. Hopefully Uncle Frank can help her out. We'll see...

Thanks for catching my typo. You're the greatest! :)

Always you fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 16-Mar-2020

Yes indeed I hope so

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

The poor thing, surviving one attack only to be hurt by another. Carrie's uncle is going to think she's lost her mind when she tells him what she saw. The chapter is very well-written, interesting start to finish. Your dialogue seems natural and your characters really come to life. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

Carrie sure has been through so much so far. But it only gets more bizarre as the story goes. Thankfully she has an uncle that is a detective and knows about the supernatural world. We'll see...

Thanks again!
Hugs,
Shana :)