Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your interesting nature poem. It flows well with truth and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thanks for reading and reviwing zanya

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I love the picture you have picked to go alone with this poem. I can see the world upset by what we have done to it.

I wonder though, since you said "Mother Nature" should the last line say her instead of "him"?

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I am sure that someone is weeping at our disrespectful behavior. Our planet is precious, and we are wrecking it. My only suggestion would be to say her dear planet home since you refer to Mother Nature.
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020

Thanks for reading zanya