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All About Pride

contest entry

33 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the deadly sin of pride, the self glorification of a human looks down on others and robs God of His glory and refused to praise God Almighty.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Sandra,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from TPAC
Exceptional
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You got my vote, finding this read a wondrous delight, structuring very strong detailing creative poetic line form. Thank you for sharing this amazing concept. All stated in my opinion.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    TPAC,

    Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, your vote and six star rating, all are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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Very well done! This is so true, pride it definitely a destroyer of the soul as one day pride does catch up with you. You also alienate so many others around you when pride is present! great job! xoxo

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Diana,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...

    Portia
reply by Diana L Crawford on 16-Mar-2020
    Very welcome!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Pride is certainly up there... and it tends to reinforce itself! :) Great interpretation for the theme this evening -- best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Yvette,

    Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.

    Lots of love...Portia
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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Then rob God of Glory, without a sweat (This should be robs as you are talking about 'it' which is singular.)

Well said in a lovely poetic way with excellent use of rhyme. Best wishes in the contest,my friend with this lovely entry~Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and bringing the error to my attention.

    Blessings...
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello unknown writer of the deadly sins prompt congest is done very well, letting us readers realize the PRIDE is
is the poisonous of all the sins.
Gert

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments,

    Blessings...
Comment from Janet Foor
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Pride certainly is poisonous and one of the deadly sins and your poem portrays it clearly.
Great artwork and presentation. Good rhyme and alliteration.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    Thank you kindly for you review.

    Blessings...
Comment from lance michaels
Exceptional
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This is an incredible piece of poetry! Pride is the worst of the seven deadlies, because all the others arise from pride. You explained that fact masterfully. The best, and most important poem I've read in a very long time. I could go on and on about how good this post really is!!!

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A good description of pride here and being proud always feels like someone thinks they are better than the next man, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    Thank you kindly my friend.

    Blessings...
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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This is a poem that is defining Pride, one of the deadly sins, in exquisite detail. Most of us have had dealings where because of pride, the wrong solution has been applied in a dire situation, leaving a very vulnerable situation. Depending on a Leader with too much pride, can be catastrophic.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...