Lord, Send Us A Priest
A prayer11 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I found your words were very interesting to read
you captured my attention from the first line to the last,
I'm sure many people feel the same way special sense what we are going through with our president and the Corona-virus
No one can help us the lord in his time.
Cookie
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I found your words were very interesting to read
you captured my attention from the first line to the last,
I'm sure many people feel the same way special sense what we are going through with our president and the Corona-virus
No one can help us the lord in his time.
Cookie
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This string of cantos makes the strong point and sincerest request for a conqueror to wipe the floor with our world's problems and set us on a new path.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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This string of cantos makes the strong point and sincerest request for a conqueror to wipe the floor with our world's problems and set us on a new path.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thanks for that 6th star, I'm honored.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/prayer about the state of the world that is so bad that we cannot see any future here on earth. We pray to God to send someone powerful to change this place into a better one.
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A very well-written poem/prayer about the state of the world that is so bad that we cannot see any future here on earth. We pray to God to send someone powerful to change this place into a better one.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Lord, Send Us A Priest
by Clockwise
Hello my friend,
Interesting poem about exercising the evil in the world. You ask God for a priest...a Messiah.
Woke means perceived awareness of issues concerning social justice and racial justice. I think it should be ,,,,awoke..
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Lord, Send Us A Priest
by Clockwise
Hello my friend,
Interesting poem about exercising the evil in the world. You ask God for a priest...a Messiah.
Woke means perceived awareness of issues concerning social justice and racial justice. I think it should be ,,,,awoke..
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this poetic prayer. I like the illustration you have chosen to accompany your poem; I might recommend increasing the size of the text so that it is easier to read. You also could manipulate the background and font color for better presentation.
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Thank you for sharing this poetic prayer. I like the illustration you have chosen to accompany your poem; I might recommend increasing the size of the text so that it is easier to read. You also could manipulate the background and font color for better presentation.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow ode to the holly priest who can exorcise your pains and fears, and absolute you of your doubts. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Good luck with your writings.
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Wow ode to the holly priest who can exorcise your pains and fears, and absolute you of your doubts. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
Comment from Angelina Alaimo
This writing is definitely excellent. The rhythm is spot on in the beginning and has a nice flow to it. Mid-end it tends to sway off a bit trying to capture its essence flow but overall all well written.
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This writing is definitely excellent. The rhythm is spot on in the beginning and has a nice flow to it. Mid-end it tends to sway off a bit trying to capture its essence flow but overall all well written.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
I greatly enjoyed dining on this food-for-thought piece as gradually, working my way through the courses the false prophets exposed themselves. This is a well thought out and presented piece of didactic poetry.
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I greatly enjoyed dining on this food-for-thought piece as gradually, working my way through the courses the false prophets exposed themselves. This is a well thought out and presented piece of didactic poetry.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
Comment from samandlancelot
Clockwise,
Your emotion and pain is evident throughout your poem, and your prayerful request for your Lord to send someone more pure than what is here now seems heartfelt. Life has ebbed to the point where pain is the only reminder you are still alive.
You want peace, but if God leads you to a new place with new understanding, there will be no peace until He brings you there. The answer is between you and God, not with someone outside of you. It's the hardest kind of fight, because Satan will interfere every step of the way, but worth every never-seeming-to-end tribulation.
Patricia
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Clockwise,
Your emotion and pain is evident throughout your poem, and your prayerful request for your Lord to send someone more pure than what is here now seems heartfelt. Life has ebbed to the point where pain is the only reminder you are still alive.
You want peace, but if God leads you to a new place with new understanding, there will be no peace until He brings you there. The answer is between you and God, not with someone outside of you. It's the hardest kind of fight, because Satan will interfere every step of the way, but worth every never-seeming-to-end tribulation.
Patricia
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We have many challenges in life and some suffer more than others and our faith keeps us steady at times if we believe, this is a melancholy but faithful write, love Dolly x
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We have many challenges in life and some suffer more than others and our faith keeps us steady at times if we believe, this is a melancholy but faithful write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
