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Airborne

Freedom

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and well written 6 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
    Thanks.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a wonderfully creative and quite awesome offering for this limited contest!! ;) I would only suggest a bit of change in your punctuation (below) just add a bit of excitement for your reader to feel those 6 words and the picture you're painting! ;)

Self quarantined
in Winter...
Welcome Spring!

Feel free to ignore! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
    Thanks.
Comment from LisaMay
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This poem is very topical - an airborne threat keeps us at home, hoping that spring will see freedom gained. Economy of words has sharpened the message.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
    Thanks.