Airborne
Freedom3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 6 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
This is a very beautiful and well written 6 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thanks.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderfully creative and quite awesome offering for this limited contest!! ;) I would only suggest a bit of change in your punctuation (below) just add a bit of excitement for your reader to feel those 6 words and the picture you're painting! ;)
Self quarantined
in Winter...
Welcome Spring!
Feel free to ignore! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
What a wonderfully creative and quite awesome offering for this limited contest!! ;) I would only suggest a bit of change in your punctuation (below) just add a bit of excitement for your reader to feel those 6 words and the picture you're painting! ;)
Self quarantined
in Winter...
Welcome Spring!
Feel free to ignore! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thanks.
Comment from LisaMay
This poem is very topical - an airborne threat keeps us at home, hoping that spring will see freedom gained. Economy of words has sharpened the message.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
This poem is very topical - an airborne threat keeps us at home, hoping that spring will see freedom gained. Economy of words has sharpened the message.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thanks.