Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry

Excellent

A lovely poem shaped appropriately like a spaceship which soars into heaven. Your poem also soars in spirit and hope. I enjoyed it. Did you paint that gorgeous flower in a vase artwork? It is gloriously colorful and realistic.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020

Thank you for your review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great message in your spaceship poem, Patricia! Yes, it's only the Lord Who can give us true peace during times of trial and even when times are good! Sending a prayer for healing for your eyes!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020

Thank you for your review.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Pat,
This is a flowing poem in a format I have never heard of before. It reminds us tht we can get through any hardship with faith and prayer.
Pretty roses for the artwork.
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020

Thanks Joan for the review. The format is one I created several years ago. It is a syllable count format 1,3,6,9,12,9,6,3,1 it is then centered on the page. It can be as many spaceships as desired.

reply by dragonpoet on 13-Mar-2020

My plearuse. Is there a form similar to this format but with even syllable counts?
Joan

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020

There is a similar format called Even the Odds which is syllable count of 2,4,6,8,10,9,7,5,3,1 centered on page and the first line and last line must relate in some way.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice and well written poem you have penned about praising God for being with you in all the trials you have come through. You used great words and very lovely imagery from the art work. I love your format. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thanks for the review. I am a bit slow as my vision is giving me fits.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written spaceship poem. We can depend on God to be there when we have a difficult trial to help us through the hardship with as smile on his face He bring us peace, and we can praise Him.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thanks for the review. I am a bit slow as my vision is giving me fits.

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

You expressed exactly how believers praise their Maker in a simple, sweet, and gentle poem. Then you chose to show His beautiful handiwork with the photo. Amazing!

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thanks for the review. I am a bit slow as my vision is giving me fits.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 18-Mar-2020

You never have to answer me. I'll understand.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

A beautiful vase of these gorgeous roses - lovely artwork Patricia
and a well designed, spiritual spaceship poem
God gave peace and a smile - lovely, cheery line in a great presentation.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thanks for the review. I am a bit slow as my vision is giving me fits.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your striking, bouquet tribute and your rhymed, spaceship poem. What a lovely ensemble and encouragement about hope! Here's to continued peace and smiles. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thanks for the review. I am a bit slow as my vision is giving me fits.

reply by Joan E. on 17-Mar-2020

I am sorry your vision is giving you more problems. I hope there is a solution available or at least on the horizon. Gentle hugs- Joan

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Beautifully presented poem. Very meaningful. When things are so bad it feels we can't cope thankfully we have to get comfort and hope of from God. I pity those who fail to turn to God in times of trial.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thanks for the review. I am a bit slow as my vision is giving me fits.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Whenever I feel depressed, I pray, God has never let me down. I always feel better, blessed if you will. Your poetry always feels like a prayer, I relish every word you write. I look forward to each poem. Thank you for your work.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020

Thanks for the review. I am a bit slow as my vision is giving me fits.