Ever Our Light
The only true light our sky knows...15 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Just a little space trivia from the rocket scientist that dwells in the heart of Yvette. LOL And why is it that you went into mathematics instead of science when you started teaching in high school?
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Just a little space trivia from the rocket scientist that dwells in the heart of Yvette. LOL And why is it that you went into mathematics instead of science when you started teaching in high school?
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Actually, I've always LOVED math -- my dad convinced me that to get a degree in math was not as marketable as a degree in Physics (okay, looking back I raise an eyebrow cuz he has a PhD in Physics... lol!) so I got the Physics one. But math? Math is my passion (and fantasy!) ... ;) :)
Comment from June Sargent
The fiery yang makes way for the cool yin at night, allowing the evening mist to refresh and renew us before another day begins. Balance of nature - we can learn from it
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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The fiery yang makes way for the cool yin at night, allowing the evening mist to refresh and renew us before another day begins. Balance of nature - we can learn from it
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Oh, you are so right about that, June -- and learn we should!! ;) :) Have a great week! ;)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-6-2 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of sunbeams and moonbeams.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-6-2 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of sunbeams and moonbeams.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from RShipp
I believe you have meet the requirements of a 2-6-2 poem.
I would much rather a moonlit walk through the trees than a day of sunshine.
Best of luck in the 2-6-2 writing contest.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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I believe you have meet the requirements of a 2-6-2 poem.
I would much rather a moonlit walk through the trees than a day of sunshine.
Best of luck in the 2-6-2 writing contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Nice 's' alliteration with sunshine and softens. I could say there is some 'm' consonance, or nearly so, with nighttime and moonbeam(s) or one could call it 's' consonance with softens, moonbeams. Really striking art choice, too. Almost transported to another time of day! Perfect syllabic count.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Nice 's' alliteration with sunshine and softens. I could say there is some 'm' consonance, or nearly so, with nighttime and moonbeam(s) or one could call it 's' consonance with softens, moonbeams. Really striking art choice, too. Almost transported to another time of day! Perfect syllabic count.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
....Ever Our Light...is a fine entry for the 2/6/2 syllables count contest. Your syllables count is right and the presentation is beautiful. Well done
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Hello my friend
....Ever Our Light...is a fine entry for the 2/6/2 syllables count contest. Your syllables count is right and the presentation is beautiful. Well done
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-6-2 poem about the sunshine that softens the nighttime light with silvery moonbeams produced by the reflection of the sun on the moon surface.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A very well-written 2-6-2 poem about the sunshine that softens the nighttime light with silvery moonbeams produced by the reflection of the sun on the moon surface.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review, Sandra - very appreciated!!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
This is beautiful! That the moonbeams are really reflected sunlight. So true, but we don't think of it that way. And to continue the analogy, God wants us to reflect his light in the same way.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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This is beautiful! That the moonbeams are really reflected sunlight. So true, but we don't think of it that way. And to continue the analogy, God wants us to reflect his light in the same way.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review - I'm so glad you enjoyed!
Comment from May 1
That's so wonderfully said, I love it. I love how you can paint such a clear picture in so few words. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and I think this is an awesome entry.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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That's so wonderfully said, I love it. I love how you can paint such a clear picture in so few words. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and I think this is an awesome entry.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review - I'm glad you enjoyed!
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Exactly!! And sometimes I am amazed at people who are grown ups and still dont know that the moon is merely a reflective agent and its light also comes from the sun itself! Without the sun, both are days and nights shall be lost in darkness forever! The sun is what helps us distinguish between the day and the night!
Really liked your entry and I wish you my best for the contest as well :-)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Exactly!! And sometimes I am amazed at people who are grown ups and still dont know that the moon is merely a reflective agent and its light also comes from the sun itself! Without the sun, both are days and nights shall be lost in darkness forever! The sun is what helps us distinguish between the day and the night!
Really liked your entry and I wish you my best for the contest as well :-)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review - much appreciated!
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You are most welcome :-)
