Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Chapter 8 - Part One"It was their world long before our existence...
17 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
I do not want to stop to write a review. I just want to get to the next chapter. LOL Have to add some more words because this is not long enough. Well, this should do it.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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I do not want to stop to write a review. I just want to get to the next chapter. LOL Have to add some more words because this is not long enough. Well, this should do it.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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LOL!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
Comment from Sankey
Getting more and more intriguing. Glad I am following along with you after being away for so long. Looking forward to where it is all going. Keep up the good work. No spags.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Getting more and more intriguing. Glad I am following along with you after being away for so long. Looking forward to where it is all going. Keep up the good work. No spags.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Wow! ;) You are on a roll here... ;) :) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Yeah!!! Hooray!!! My story's back!!! Did you do this just for me? It wouldn't surprise me a bit, My Lovely Lady of the South. By the way, thanks for the cards, they're so sweet! I don't go to my e-mail often, but had to go there several times last week and it was fun to get your cards.
I'm so excited you've gotten back to my favorite story! Holy Crap indeed! You make me want to throw Shawn over for that man! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Yeah!!! Hooray!!! My story's back!!! Did you do this just for me? It wouldn't surprise me a bit, My Lovely Lady of the South. By the way, thanks for the cards, they're so sweet! I don't go to my e-mail often, but had to go there several times last week and it was fun to get your cards.
I'm so excited you've gotten back to my favorite story! Holy Crap indeed! You make me want to throw Shawn over for that man! ;)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You SOO Rock, BLOTN!! Thank you so very much-- and, yes, now I have to get passed all this 're-vamping' nonsense (something to which Demetrius can totally relate!!) before I can pick up again.... but I WILL get there!! Ugh!! :) :) Yvette
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
What a wealth of interesting characters and quite the easiest jump into an established story line I've ever made. Thank you for inviting me into this world you are creating and I look forward to the unfolding of the tale into summer.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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What a wealth of interesting characters and quite the easiest jump into an established story line I've ever made. Thank you for inviting me into this world you are creating and I look forward to the unfolding of the tale into summer.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Oh, I'm so very glad you've jumped on board with Maggie and the crew! ;) It's so good to have you stop by for read and review... gonna be a fun ride... ;) :)
** Please forgive my tardiness. I've been re-doing lesson plans and such and preparing to vid lectures/set up online discussion groups amid the weeks of school closing we are faced with. :) Thanx for understanding! ;)
Comment from poetwatch
What can I say, but hoo-ray! Maggie is back to stay. Yvette, you don't know how long I've waited for her to appear. The only problem is that spring break will soon be over and I will have to read reruns. :) This is a good story book to entice your readers to the magic of your pen. Soon you will catch the rest with your beguiling story not knowing what will happen next. :) Will be watching out for your next.
Jose
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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What can I say, but hoo-ray! Maggie is back to stay. Yvette, you don't know how long I've waited for her to appear. The only problem is that spring break will soon be over and I will have to read reruns. :) This is a good story book to entice your readers to the magic of your pen. Soon you will catch the rest with your beguiling story not knowing what will happen next. :) Will be watching out for your next.
Jose
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for jumping back in, Jose -- your support is an awesome feeling! ;) I'm not believing how much I've missed this story and I'm looking forward to keeping up through the summer! :) Sorry about the re-runs, but when I become a rich and famous author I can 'walk away' from teaching and really write (oh, that would be HEAVEN on Earth!)... Until then, my goal is AT LEAST a chapter a month... all depends on school and life - lol!! :) Thanx so much for the awesome review and those awesome stars... Take care over there, sir! ;) Yvette
P.S. Young Nicholas' story continues this evening!! :) :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A marvelous book to read. Glad that you are continuing writing the saga. So glad that I caught up with reading the chapters you have written. Your writing is amazing.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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A marvelous book to read. Glad that you are continuing writing the saga. So glad that I caught up with reading the chapters you have written. Your writing is amazing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Oh, thank you for your lovely comments here, Rosemary -- look for more on Maggie every month! ;) Of course, young Nicholas' story [totally different!] continues this evening!! :) :) Thanx for your awesome support, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Shirley McLain
This chapter certainly make me what to read more. I do plan on doing the back reading for your story. I did not see one thing out of place. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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This chapter certainly make me what to read more. I do plan on doing the back reading for your story. I did not see one thing out of place. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I'm so very excited that you've decided to jump on board with Maggie and the gang, Shirley!! I'm not believing how much I've missed this story and I'm looking forward to keeping up through the summer! :) As always, my goal is AT LEAST a chapter a month... all depends on school and life - lol!! :)
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I'll be waiting.
Comment from aryr
It was great to see Maggie and Addy back once again, Yvette. The nice part was that with just the little refresher, it was like coming home. Maggie is definitely in for the adventure of her life. It was nice to see that Bongo and Twilight were there as well. Great reading.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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It was great to see Maggie and Addy back once again, Yvette. The nice part was that with just the little refresher, it was like coming home. Maggie is definitely in for the adventure of her life. It was nice to see that Bongo and Twilight were there as well. Great reading.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for jumping back in, Alie -- your support is an awesome feeling! ;) I'm not believing how much I've missed this story and I'm looking forward to keeping up through the summer! :) As always, my goal is AT LEAST a chapter a month... all depends on school and life - lol!! :) Take care, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Yvette,
What an awesome story. Your style of writing reminds me of Jean m Auel with valley of the horses... Different time. Your story happens in the future or another world. Very interesting characters.
Maggie, Addison, and
Bingo the cat...how big is he? Tiger big? Mountain cat big? Who is the sexy guy at the end?
Well done my friend.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Hello, Yvette,
What an awesome story. Your style of writing reminds me of Jean m Auel with valley of the horses... Different time. Your story happens in the future or another world. Very interesting characters.
Maggie, Addison, and
Bingo the cat...how big is he? Tiger big? Mountain cat big? Who is the sexy guy at the end?
Well done my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Will have to look up that author... never heard of him... ;) This story is happening right now, today.... it's just kind of an 'altered reality', shall we say.. ;) :) And Bongo is supposedly just a domesticated cat, but he's quite large...
And that sexy guy will play a major role as the plot continues, although he already does in the house here... :) Join us! :)
Yvette
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Jean m Auel is a lady. She is a retired teacher like you. She started writing at 50 years old. Her first book is the clan of the cave bear. It's a trilogy. She sold 45 million copies. I think you would like it.
Comment from Sulyman Hannafi M.A.
Hmm..The linkage of the story is chronological despite that i havn't been able to review the previous chapters. The dictions are employed proffesssionally to convey the ideas but it's quite clear that the language is not that too rigid, so that the reader would be compelled through its light condensed forms to finish reading the chapter s ahead.
Keep it up sir, you have composed well indeed.
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Hmm..The linkage of the story is chronological despite that i havn't been able to review the previous chapters. The dictions are employed proffesssionally to convey the ideas but it's quite clear that the language is not that too rigid, so that the reader would be compelled through its light condensed forms to finish reading the chapter s ahead.
Keep it up sir, you have composed well indeed.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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thank you.
