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Unperson

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26 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is intense a reality check for all of us who area world away from som3 of this and oblivious to what is right in front of us. The world has three tiers: The HAVES, the HAVE NOTS, and the CLOSER TO THE BOTTOM THAN THE TOP AND SHOULD BE CONCERNED ABOUT THE MIDDLE AND BOTTOM FOLKS BEFORE WE'RE ALL ON THE BOTTOM.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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This was such a touching piece! So detail and heart-wrenching. Just the fact that this is so hidden under the surface. People like this don't stand out in a crowd and therefore get overlooked by others who never know the horrors the person is going through. Very well done! Thank you so much for posting! xoxo

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
reply by Diana L Crawford on 16-Mar-2020
    Ha! I know what you mean. I like to write the deeply sad and then come back with the light hearted piece just to cheer others up from my sad ones! LoL!
Comment from RShipp
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What grand writing for each of your 'unperson' journal entries.

There are so many of these persons in our world, one does not have to look far to see one.

I did not remember the Orwell's "unperson".

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    I'm writing a happy one next time! Many thanks for your kind words.

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Cindy Warren
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It's so sad to think so many people live like that, and nobody is willing to do anything about it. It bugs me, especially in the wealthy countries. They've closed mental hospitals here too, and most families simply can't keep a mentally ill addict in their homes. They need professional help, more than most people can provide.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Susan Larson
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It's obvious you've done a lot of research or have had a lot of experience with these situations. The slavery issue is appalling, especially all the child slave traffic right here in the United States. Why isn't more of this in the news? Virtual six.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    ESPN had a chance to speak out about the subject of sex trafficking when the owner of the Patriots got caught on the video at that one club in Florida. That got swept under the carpet so fast! I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words and the thought of a six!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written heartfelt story. We all know and have some misfortune in our lives. Sonetimes we get through it one way or another other times we just make the best of the situation and live the best we can.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a powerful, sad, emotional story, Mike. No person should be treated that way. Governments should be ashamed that they are forcing the most vulnerable onto the streets. The numbers of slaves in todays world, are mind-blowing! It's the twenty-first century! I feel so sad that so many people are still suffering so much these days. Well done, my friend, on writing this piece. Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I love this. You've described many parts of society that seem like they're considered as nobodies, unwanted, and forgotten. This is really good work that's shows a compassionate heart and is well thought out. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from lance michaels
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Very poignant but thoughtful poem on the forgotten people of the world that struggle every single day of their lives just to survive another day. Thank you for bringing this sad situation to light!

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Mike, this is a very provoking read.
Although all of it is common knowledge, it is more impactful when the statistics are laid bare to fully comprehend the negative affect on humans - women, children and men. A well written and eye opening read. I cannot help but shower you with a six. ~DD

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
    This is the second one I've written like this. I'm writing a happy one next time. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike