Comment from cdefan

Excellent

As always, a very good chapter with lots of drama!! It will be interesting to see what Uncle Frank thinks about all this, and will the beast return. Now the plot thickens!!!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020

Awww... thanks cdefan :)

I appreciate you taking the time to read my chapter. Love the feedback!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Love your set up and am intrigued by these two new characters. Not sure where it's all leading but I'm sure this beginning is only the tip of the iceberg. Love it girl.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020

Aww... thank you, Faye :)

I'm so thrilled you are intrigued by my new characters. It's so fun to create something new and bring it into the Breedline world. So far, I'm still in the beginning stages and this can lead to many directions. As I write, things just seem to happen without a big plan. We will see...

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from rwilliam

Exceptional

Really well written chapter. It flowed smoothly and was believable. You did a wonderful job of writing the intensity of her emotions.

I really liked this:...Well, it looks like it's gonna be a shitty Valentine's for the two of us."

I didn't catch any fixes. Keep up the great work, girl. You are doing awesome.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020

Aww... thanks so much! :)

So excited you liked this one. I'm having to cut my chapters in half here. I don't want to add too much in FanStory and bore the readers with too much reading all at once. Most of my chapters are 5-9 pages long.
Yeah, Valentine's Day isn't going all too well for my characters. Poor girls!

Thanks for taking the time to read this. I appreciate you!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Captivating chapter and artwork, Ms Shana. So now we know who the girl is that was attacked. It makes me wonder if Carrie is going to be one a new character.
You have me intrigued with this new book. I enjoy the mystery you are bringing into it and the horror.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Nate

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020

Thanks, Nate :)

Yes, Carrie will play a big part in this book. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks again for your support! It's always great to hear your feedback.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

You sure know how to start a chapter off right, your poor character trying to get away. Your chapter grabbed my attention from the start and held it to the very end. It's very well-written. Your characters seem realistic, they really come to life and your dialogue seems so natural that I felt like I was watching this in real life not reading it in a book. Marvelous job as always.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020

Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

So happy to hear you are enjoying this book. My greatest prize is entertaining the reader. I hope to continue to keep you captivated.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by Mistydawn on 09-Mar-2020

I have no doubt that you will.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hello scongrove
While reading your chapter
'Werewolves are Real. I'm wondering from what I read in a leaped out of the fog and viciously attacks both men while manages to get away. Was it Jessica or Carrie that got away while the Shadow appeared then the Werewolf viciously attached the two men to me was Joseph. Am I right or wrong?
Gert

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020

Thank you, Gert :)

It was Carrie that was attacked and managed to get away. Jessica is her roommate. The Shadow wanted the girl, and just as he was about to kill Carrie's attackers, a werewolf jumped in first. Later in the story, you will find out who the werewolf is. :)

Thanks for reading my Breedline adventures and for the awesome feedback. Stay tuned... more to come!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

What a fantastic post Shana. The fact that Carrie is safe does my heart good, (see, I get involved with your characters too) but the fact that her roommate is home also safe is a plus, but boy friendless also, perhaps he's the werewolf. Heh heh. But Uncle Frank sounds interesting, could it be...? This is a different pace for you so far, that is. Wonderful post, (I can never remember a single post I wasn't absorbed in of yours, well done, my talented friend, blessings, Roy
Typo : My love life isn't all that (good) either.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020

Thank you, Roy :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Carrie will play a big part in this book, so of course she got away... this time. :) I'm so happy you get involved in the characters. That's thrilling to hear!
Soon, you will find out who the werewolf is. :)

Thanks for catching my typo. You're the best!
Always your fan,
Shana :)