Have I Told You Lately?
For my deceased wife.31 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
A nice poem of love for your wife! I suggest that you get rid of all the blank space at the bottom of the poem. Just place the cursor below as far as it will go, and delete until you get closer to the poem. Live a space equal to the space on the top!
Have a good day!
Drew
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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A nice poem of love for your wife! I suggest that you get rid of all the blank space at the bottom of the poem. Just place the cursor below as far as it will go, and delete until you get closer to the poem. Live a space equal to the space on the top!
Have a good day!
Drew
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I took your suggestion and removed the bottom space. Thank you
much, for the review and stars.
Comment from robyn corum
Willie,
How precious and dear. I'm sure your wife loved it and you earned bunches of wonderful brownie points for this one. Wow!!
It's so heartfelt and sincere.
Can you delete all the extra space at the bottom, though??
Good luck in the voting. Beautiful--
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Willie,
How precious and dear. I'm sure your wife loved it and you earned bunches of wonderful brownie points for this one. Wow!!
It's so heartfelt and sincere.
Can you delete all the extra space at the bottom, though??
Good luck in the voting. Beautiful--
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you, took your suggestion and deleted the extra space. Looks much better. Thanks for the stars.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Very nicely done poem that sounds sincere and emphasizes the need to say I Love You more often. Favorite line: I want you to hear them when you are dreaming,
Nice post!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Very nicely done poem that sounds sincere and emphasizes the need to say I Love You more often. Favorite line: I want you to hear them when you are dreaming,
Nice post!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Crystie, for the review and stars.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Willie. This is very nice. The rhyme scheme is excellent. There is not much one can say about a meaningful love poem. The poem says it all. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Hello Willie. This is very nice. The rhyme scheme is excellent. There is not much one can say about a meaningful love poem. The poem says it all. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Robert, your review and stars are very much appreciated, thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, the stars are for the verse alone, an exceptionally beautiful love poem, smooth in rhyme and movement in its entirety - a joy to read about genuine and forever love. My only suggestion would be to stylize such an exquisite write in the manner it deserves, laid out better, with no huge space beneath the verse - the image complements the verse perfectly. Best wishes in the contest with this gem...
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, the stars are for the verse alone, an exceptionally beautiful love poem, smooth in rhyme and movement in its entirety - a joy to read about genuine and forever love. My only suggestion would be to stylize such an exquisite write in the manner it deserves, laid out better, with no huge space beneath the verse - the image complements the verse perfectly. Best wishes in the contest with this gem...
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Wow! Six stars, you honor me. I amended the spaces, per your suggestion, thanks.
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You are very welcome, Willie, but there was only one huge empty space, the one after/under the poem...Eve
Comment from June Sargent
This is a beautiful tribute to your wife and the life you shared together. It could actually be lyrics to a love song as well! Words to remind us never to take each other for granted.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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This is a beautiful tribute to your wife and the life you shared together. It could actually be lyrics to a love song as well! Words to remind us never to take each other for granted.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you, June, for your review and stars.
Comment from Therese Caron
What a lovely, heartfelt poem for someone you love very much, who is now gone. It sounds as though you showed your love and spoke it too. This is very well written.
If you want to get rid of all that extra pink, just go to edit, put your cursor way below the words, and keep tapping the X button on the keyboard until all the extra is gone. Your poem will look nicer. I love the poem!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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What a lovely, heartfelt poem for someone you love very much, who is now gone. It sounds as though you showed your love and spoke it too. This is very well written.
If you want to get rid of all that extra pink, just go to edit, put your cursor way below the words, and keep tapping the X button on the keyboard until all the extra is gone. Your poem will look nicer. I love the poem!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Therese, for your thoughtful review and stars. Are you any relation to Leslie.
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No relation that I know of! Anyway, it would be my husband, as this is his name.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Have I Told You Lately?
by Willie P. Smith
Hello, Willie,
Your heartfelt poem made me sad but it's wonderful to tell the one you love how you feel...not all couples do. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Have I Told You Lately?
by Willie P. Smith
Hello, Willie,
Your heartfelt poem made me sad but it's wonderful to tell the one you love how you feel...not all couples do. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you, for your very nice words and stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your memories are melancholy here Willie as you remember your anniversary with love, I am sorry for your loss and I enjoyed your sweet loving and romantic poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Your memories are melancholy here Willie as you remember your anniversary with love, I am sorry for your loss and I enjoyed your sweet loving and romantic poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly, She will be gone 5 years the 20th of
this month. Don't know how I lasted this long without her.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about telling a loved one we love them can never be too many times said. They should never feel unloved whatever the circumstances may be.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about telling a loved one we love them can never be too many times said. They should never feel unloved whatever the circumstances may be.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Sandra. Your review and stars are very much appreciated.
