God Saw Me For What I Would Be
A commentary on life as God sees us.16 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Isn't it wonderful that the Lord sees each person as what he or she could be, with His unique love and guidance? Your poem is very uplifting and praiseful of the Lord.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Isn't it wonderful that the Lord sees each person as what he or she could be, with His unique love and guidance? Your poem is very uplifting and praiseful of the Lord.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A message of hope, He did not see what I was, but what He had the chance to mold in this piece of clay. Very well done, with the sing/song meter makes it a great message
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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A message of hope, He did not see what I was, but what He had the chance to mold in this piece of clay. Very well done, with the sing/song meter makes it a great message
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Comment from May 1
That's such an interesting way of looking at it, beautifully worded. Also, I like how you chose to visually present this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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That's such an interesting way of looking at it, beautifully worded. Also, I like how you chose to visually present this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, patcelaw,
....God Saw Me For What I Would Be....is a very nice religious poem. The presentation is beautiful. God, like a parent sees the best of us.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Hello, patcelaw,
....God Saw Me For What I Would Be....is a very nice religious poem. The presentation is beautiful. God, like a parent sees the best of us.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Comment from judiverse
Lovely artwork. What a lovely thought that God saw beyond what you were and saw the possibilities. As you write, he took your sin away and healed you. This is a great thought for parents and teachers, too, to see the possibilities in the child. Excellent rhyme. judi
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Lovely artwork. What a lovely thought that God saw beyond what you were and saw the possibilities. As you write, he took your sin away and healed you. This is a great thought for parents and teachers, too, to see the possibilities in the child. Excellent rhyme. judi
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome. We like to know we're valued for our potential. judi
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your title and the beautiful bouquet in your artwork. I enjoyed your addition of rhymes to your poem as you spoke with gratitude from your heart. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I admired your title and the beautiful bouquet in your artwork. I enjoyed your addition of rhymes to your poem as you spoke with gratitude from your heart. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Yes Patricia, here works the rhyming poetry just fine. It makes it a lovely tribute to your worship of God, your thankfulness for being saved and your never-ending praise of Him. Well done, and beautiful flower painting.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Yes Patricia, here works the rhyming poetry just fine. It makes it a lovely tribute to your worship of God, your thankfulness for being saved and your never-ending praise of Him. Well done, and beautiful flower painting.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Comment from Therese Caron
Lovely poem about salvation. Having your spirit made whole is a wonderful thing. A true blessing. The image you chose is gorgeous addition to your poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely pound with us.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Lovely poem about salvation. Having your spirit made whole is a wonderful thing. A true blessing. The image you chose is gorgeous addition to your poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely pound with us.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Comment from BethShelby
These are lovely thoughts well displayed. I thankful God doesn't see us as we are. I hope Hes still seeing me as I will be because i haven't arrived yet but hopefully He still working on me. You have a rhyme scheme here.
A B C B B C D D nice.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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These are lovely thoughts well displayed. I thankful God doesn't see us as we are. I hope Hes still seeing me as I will be because i haven't arrived yet but hopefully He still working on me. You have a rhyme scheme here.
A B C B B C D D nice.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Comment from lyenochka
Yes, praise to Jesus for covering us with His righteousness and making it possible for God the Father to see all that we will be beyond this world through Jesus!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Yes, praise to Jesus for covering us with His righteousness and making it possible for God the Father to see all that we will be beyond this world through Jesus!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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