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Horror Haiku

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Withering Winter"
a collection of contemporary haiku

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mark Schardine
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withering winter
weaves through the frigid castle--
cold-blooded queen

She is not an enlightened despot, and has no sense of justice. Her subjects must beware.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
    Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
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Good choice of artwork but oh my God please please change the font colour! Its chalk white against a while background barely readable and at first glance, I thought you had left this one blank!

Having said that, your words rightly inspire the fear that they are meant to!
Have a good day.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
    Hello, I am having problems with the post. I'm working with Tom, the site manager to solve it. I am not able to make changes due to the two posts a day rule.
reply by Aaqib Naeem on 05-Mar-2020
    Oh alright then! Be sure to make them when you can then!
Comment from RShipp
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First: Did you know there was no haiku attached? Or, am I assume this is a commercial (which is not a bad thing) for your books?

I have never heard of Contemporary Haiku either.

I have never read a 'book' of haiku... not to mention, I didn't know there was such a thing as 'horror haiku'.

Having stumbled upon this, I will avail myself to the links. The five stars were for the commercial?

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
    I posted this by mistake. I am trying to fix the problem. I contacted Tom. Thank you for letting me know. I am sorry.
reply by RShipp on 05-Mar-2020
    No problem... I just wanted to make you aware of it. Sometimes I post and step away for a day or two... I tried to read the horror haiku book but I am new to this 'book thing' and apparently I don't know how?
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020