Tangerine Dream
English Haiku17 total reviews
Comment from Mark Valentine
Rarely have I seen better optics on a post. the font and the photo seem to tango together. And another one with the word 'caress' - it does lend itself to poetry doesn't it? I always appreciate your notes that help me understand the haiku form better. this one certainly captures, the 'moment in time" phenomenon you describe. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
Rarely have I seen better optics on a post. the font and the photo seem to tango together. And another one with the word 'caress' - it does lend itself to poetry doesn't it? I always appreciate your notes that help me understand the haiku form better. this one certainly captures, the 'moment in time" phenomenon you describe. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Mark. It's always a pleasure to read your kind and helpful reviews.
gypsy
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Yes! After the Spring comes Summer! I just can't wait. Well written in grammar, content and style. Wishing you all the very best! This is indeed wonderful!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
Yes! After the Spring comes Summer! I just can't wait. Well written in grammar, content and style. Wishing you all the very best! This is indeed wonderful!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend. :)
gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
I can take time enough to read this excellent haiku, Gypsy, it was rough, but I somehow managed to make it through to the end without collapsing in exhaustion!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
I can take time enough to read this excellent haiku, Gypsy, it was rough, but I somehow managed to make it through to the end without collapsing in exhaustion!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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LOL thank you, Mike. I always appreciate your good humor. Thank you for the kind and helpful review.
gypsy :)
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful English haiku you have penned. You used very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose and very lovely words with lovely font and colors too. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful English haiku you have penned. You used very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose and very lovely words with lovely font and colors too. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the kind and helpful review, my friend. :)
gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Your presentation and words are simply beautiful, Gypsy, leaving the reader with a feeling of warmth and awe with their own vision of that 'tangerine dream' of summers past! :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
Your presentation and words are simply beautiful, Gypsy, leaving the reader with a feeling of warmth and awe with their own vision of that 'tangerine dream' of summers past! :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Yvette. I appreciate your kind review. :)
gypsy
Comment from royowen
We've been getting a lot of these sunsets, because of dust particles, due to extreme drought here in Australia, but this is a beautifully designed and crafted poetry dear Gypsy, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
We've been getting a lot of these sunsets, because of dust particles, due to extreme drought here in Australia, but this is a beautifully designed and crafted poetry dear Gypsy, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your review.
gypsy
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Bless you Roy
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful poem in the wording and in the presentation. I wish you a very good evening and night.
May your dreams always be colorful.
patricia
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
This is a wonderful poem in the wording and in the presentation. I wish you a very good evening and night.
May your dreams always be colorful.
patricia
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend.
gypsy