Tangerine Dream
English Haiku17 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
Just looking at the picture came picture myself there enjoying it's natural beaut. Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
Just looking at the picture came picture myself there enjoying it's natural beaut. Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You painted a quaint sunset scene here with your words, the gentle breeze and the orange colour caressing the earth, a serene scene,much enjoyed . . . Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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You painted a quaint sunset scene here with your words, the gentle breeze and the orange colour caressing the earth, a serene scene,much enjoyed . . . Love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Mark Schardine
dry summer wind
caresses the old seared land--
tangerine dream
A gentle breeze on a hot day to cool off, and we see the intense sunlight distort colors.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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dry summer wind
caresses the old seared land--
tangerine dream
A gentle breeze on a hot day to cool off, and we see the intense sunlight distort colors.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Ulla
Hola, Marival, it is so nice to have you back on the site writing haiku poems and reminding us what its all about. I've really missed that. I do write haiku but not so much on this site. I'm a member of an Australian haiku club.
Thanks a lot for sharing this lovely haiku with us. It's beautiful and it gives me so much inspiration. I will endeavor to write some haiku poems here, as well. I wish I had a six. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Hola, Marival, it is so nice to have you back on the site writing haiku poems and reminding us what its all about. I've really missed that. I do write haiku but not so much on this site. I'm a member of an Australian haiku club.
Thanks a lot for sharing this lovely haiku with us. It's beautiful and it gives me so much inspiration. I will endeavor to write some haiku poems here, as well. I wish I had a six. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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What is the Australian haiku club like? I thought you lived in Spain. It's good to be back. Thank you for reviewing my work.
gypsy
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Oh, I do live in Spain, but I have a friend in Brisbane who runs a a small haiku club. She used to be a member of FS. I enjoy writing my haiku there.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about a tangerine dream that a summer sunset in Africa can create at the right time and at the right place. A beautiful picture to complement the haiku.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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A very well-written haiku about a tangerine dream that a summer sunset in Africa can create at the right time and at the right place. A beautiful picture to complement the haiku.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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thank you for the review, Sandra.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Your colorized text is a bonus to your verse. Of course, I would favor 'orange dreaming' for your last line, which is the color I 'see' in your illustration (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Gypsy,
Your colorized text is a bonus to your verse. Of course, I would favor 'orange dreaming' for your last line, which is the color I 'see' in your illustration (-;
Mark
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Mark. I always appreciate your thoughtful reviews and helpful feedback. Haiku is supposed to create a mental picture with words. I add pictures for artistic effect but it should not be a literal interpretation of the poem. I chose tangerine dream because it has a good ring to it...a poetic effect.
thank you, Mike,
gypsy
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Gypsy,
I am really OK with your poetic choice (-;
Mark
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Thank you, Mark. :)
Comment from Joan E.
What a splendid picture and matching, colorful presentation! I admired your personifying the sun in this 4-6-4 haiku. Even without the artwork, I could visualize the scene. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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What a splendid picture and matching, colorful presentation! I admired your personifying the sun in this 4-6-4 haiku. Even without the artwork, I could visualize the scene. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend ☺️
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I like your nicely colored haiku, Gypsy. Your picture is a great choice, although your words paint a great picture of their own. Great job with the syllable count. I noticed you used the word 'dry' twice. Maybe use 'parched' in the second line. Thanks for sharing and for the notes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I like your nicely colored haiku, Gypsy. Your picture is a great choice, although your words paint a great picture of their own. Great job with the syllable count. I noticed you used the word 'dry' twice. Maybe use 'parched' in the second line. Thanks for sharing and for the notes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Beautifully written with the descriptive first lines using the summer season. Now the last I assume is from the dryness of the plains and the reflection of the moon?
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Beautifully written with the descriptive first lines using the summer season. Now the last I assume is from the dryness of the plains and the reflection of the moon?
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your colorful haiku and the multiple feelings that "tangerine dream" conjures up. Also, thank you for your notes and references. Cool job making the hot links.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Enjoyed your colorful haiku and the multiple feelings that "tangerine dream" conjures up. Also, thank you for your notes and references. Cool job making the hot links.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
