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Divine Design

His gift to human kind.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the sunrise waking the world.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, along with
the topic.
-The imagery is effective
as you describe as the sun rises.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    Thanks for the read and review.
reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Mar-2020
    You are very welcome.