Kite Flying time
It shan't be long, the kites will sail26 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Hello JLR. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you my friend!
Comment from Sanku
Oh! the sheer fun of flying kites! its pure joy to watch the colourful kites flying ,bobbing in the wind.And one feels very important to control the movement , to let it fly or bring it down.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Oh! the sheer fun of flying kites! its pure joy to watch the colourful kites flying ,bobbing in the wind.And one feels very important to control the movement , to let it fly or bring it down.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Sanks, you most certainly have known the experience of a kite on a string in the wind...such joy!
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
An outdoorsy activity that has the potential to provide unlimited fun and jot especially if you do it with kids! Those little angels absolutely love flying kites if they ever get the chance and get overexcited one could say!
Well written and a way to welcome spring by enjoying it to the fullest! Best wishes for the contest! :-)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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An outdoorsy activity that has the potential to provide unlimited fun and jot especially if you do it with kids! Those little angels absolutely love flying kites if they ever get the chance and get overexcited one could say!
Well written and a way to welcome spring by enjoying it to the fullest! Best wishes for the contest! :-)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Aaqib, I thank you for your review and comments, yes children and laughter and kites a perfect union.
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Oh yes indeed! :-)
And you are most welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting write full of promise and praise of spring and the happiness it brings after a long hard cold winter, breathing in the spring air sounds ideal, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This is an uplifting write full of promise and praise of spring and the happiness it brings after a long hard cold winter, breathing in the spring air sounds ideal, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Dolly, thank you fro your kind comments.
Comment from Sally Law
This was one of my favorite childhood pastimes. Remember when kites were 5 cents? Telling of our age I guess. We enjoyed them at the shore as well. The beach breeze makes them climb into the sky.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal xo
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This was one of my favorite childhood pastimes. Remember when kites were 5 cents? Telling of our age I guess. We enjoyed them at the shore as well. The beach breeze makes them climb into the sky.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal xo
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Hi Sal, they were nickel and kite tails were wore and tattered sheets,
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Kite Flying Time", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to reading your next post.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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"Kite Flying Time", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to reading your next post.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Duchess I am always grateful for your review and comments.
