Kite Flying time
It shan't be long, the kites will sail26 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-2-6-7-6, Kite Flying Time, follows the proper formatting and sends out the heads up that spring is just around the corner.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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This 2-2-6-7-6, Kite Flying Time, follows the proper formatting and sends out the heads up that spring is just around the corner.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Bill thank you!
Comment from Bichon
I loved the childlike values in this poem that really made it come to life! I could visualise the kites easily in the sky. I would like to go outside and fly one now haha,
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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I loved the childlike values in this poem that really made it come to life! I could visualise the kites easily in the sky. I would like to go outside and fly one now haha,
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Bichon, a great childhood experience!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Spring not only brings warmth to our world but the mere word creates the anticipation that fills us with hope as we see the rejuvenation of the world around us and know that we will be more willing to engage in some activities, soon. Joyful presentation.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Spring not only brings warmth to our world but the mere word creates the anticipation that fills us with hope as we see the rejuvenation of the world around us and know that we will be more willing to engage in some activities, soon. Joyful presentation.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Raffaelina, thank you!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Kite flying time is a good time! For most it is. I have no luck at flying kites. I usually have the kite broken by the time I get it put together. Nice poem! The picture looks Springy; LOL
Patty
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Kite flying time is a good time! For most it is. I have no luck at flying kites. I usually have the kite broken by the time I get it put together. Nice poem! The picture looks Springy; LOL
Patty
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Patty, thank you! Try, try again! Never too old!
Comment from Janet Foor
I love this. I am so ready for Spring. The idea of getting out the kites is so refreshing and soon it will be that time.
Great artwork to compliment this delightful poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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I love this. I am so ready for Spring. The idea of getting out the kites is so refreshing and soon it will be that time.
Great artwork to compliment this delightful poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Janet, thank you on this sunny but cool day in western NC!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the All my Left Over 2-2-5-7-5s writing prompt.
This short verse tells of celebrating spring with kite flying.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the All my Left Over 2-2-5-7-5s writing prompt.
This short verse tells of celebrating spring with kite flying.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Sharon, thank you, I hope so!
Comment from Shirley McLain
I can see why your poem has been recognized. It brings out a very vivid picture of the joy of spring and using kites. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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I can see why your poem has been recognized. It brings out a very vivid picture of the joy of spring and using kites. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Shirley, I am very appreciative of your reflection!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, JLR,
.....Kite Flying time.....is a beautiful poem about flying a kite and about spring. It flows well. Good job with the poem my friend.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Hello, JLR,
.....Kite Flying time.....is a beautiful poem about flying a kite and about spring. It flows well. Good job with the poem my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Gypsy, Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from victor 66
I celebrated spring by flying a kite when I was very young. I continued this celebration with my sons as well as with my grandchildren. My grandmother told me of when she was a child, how they made kites with newspapers and sticks from bushes. Kite flying, possibly, is one of those activities that may last forever. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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I celebrated spring by flying a kite when I was very young. I continued this celebration with my sons as well as with my grandchildren. My grandmother told me of when she was a child, how they made kites with newspapers and sticks from bushes. Kite flying, possibly, is one of those activities that may last forever. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Victor, I truly do hope that at some point in a child's life they do get to fly a kite. It seems to me a right of passage that is a must
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JLR, my feeling is that some kids will just take to it naturally while other kids will learned kite flying through their parents. I don't know what to say about the other kids.
Comment from estory
Nice job with this. I liked how the poem unfolded from those opening alliterations, 'refreshed, renewed'. It really is like catching out breath. And then the kites are the perfect image for hope; we see them sailing off to the limits of our imagination. estory
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Nice job with this. I liked how the poem unfolded from those opening alliterations, 'refreshed, renewed'. It really is like catching out breath. And then the kites are the perfect image for hope; we see them sailing off to the limits of our imagination. estory
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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estory, thank you!
