Touch Me
A 2-2-5-7-5 poem...16 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Simply beautiful!! ;) And the most appealing thing about it is the warmth that I know she feels at that window... LOL! No, seriously, Diana -- love this sensuous offering for the contest...makes a woman want someone to share it with!! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Simply beautiful!! ;) And the most appealing thing about it is the warmth that I know she feels at that window... LOL! No, seriously, Diana -- love this sensuous offering for the contest...makes a woman want someone to share it with!! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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I know! I wish I was there! Some pictures have all the luck! Haha! Thanks so much! xoxo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Absolute perfection. Erotic, sensual, lovely. And once again, all condensed into the short parameters of a 2-2-5-7-5. You are to be commended! The entire bit is lovely to look at and your poem conveys the enticing nature that is intended. Absolutely wonderful. I haven't been on the site in so long. Such a joy to open up the site and see this one! :)
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Absolute perfection. Erotic, sensual, lovely. And once again, all condensed into the short parameters of a 2-2-5-7-5. You are to be commended! The entire bit is lovely to look at and your poem conveys the enticing nature that is intended. Absolutely wonderful. I haven't been on the site in so long. Such a joy to open up the site and see this one! :)
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much! You know I?m just a romantic at heart and can?t help myself! Haha! No really, I appreciate sincerely your precious stars and awesome feedback in this!! xoxo
Comment from victor 66
This is a haunting yet quite beautiful illustration and poem. I wonder, how many of us have actually experienced such total love, desire and satisfaction. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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This is a haunting yet quite beautiful illustration and poem. I wonder, how many of us have actually experienced such total love, desire and satisfaction. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much! I think that it would be a matter of opinion, I suppose. I believe that how deep we love is our responsibility, not the other person's. I am romanticist at heart and love to expound on the matters of love :) appreciate your stars and feedback! xoxo
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Diana, you're most welcome. And yes, I suspect that love is a sensitive opinion.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are romantic and touching words filled with love and tenderness and you took me to another place, the scene resembles a place I stayed in Greece one time, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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These are romantic and touching words filled with love and tenderness and you took me to another place, the scene resembles a place I stayed in Greece one time, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Awe! so happy you liked it! Well, I want to go to Greece then!! haha! xoxo
Comment from Drew Delaney
Beautiful one here once again, you romantic nut case. I hope you do awesome in this contest. I have never known anyone so obsessed with romance. I am too old for that now, but I hope you find the love of your life.
Hugs sweet girl.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Beautiful one here once again, you romantic nut case. I hope you do awesome in this contest. I have never known anyone so obsessed with romance. I am too old for that now, but I hope you find the love of your life.
Hugs sweet girl.
Drew xx
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Haha! Just an old soul who must be saddle with the heart of a romanticism for eternity I think! LoL! Mwah! Hugs back at ya! xoxo
Comment from jenintorre
This a great entry for the competition. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for he music, I love Sade. Her music is so atmospheric of late night clubs. It takes me back.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This a great entry for the competition. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for he music, I love Sade. Her music is so atmospheric of late night clubs. It takes me back.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much! I love Sade too! She doesn't get much media attention, but she is unlike any other! appreciate you enjoyed this presentation! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a gorgeous, captivating picture. Love the words, too. Sometimes we need to hear words like your poem expresses. I think you should write a novel about love.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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What a gorgeous, captivating picture. Love the words, too. Sometimes we need to hear words like your poem expresses. I think you should write a novel about love.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Awe! I can't help, but I have always been a romantic and it is just the most natural thing for me to write about. Appreciate your vote of confidence on a book! :) xoxo
Comment from Mark D. R.
Diana,
If I was a young man again in my 20s, methinks that an enraptured state of mind would not be the outcome if I saw that woman standing there. LOL
Your total presentation will indeed have its affect on many FS readers.
Good luck in this contest.
Mark
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Diana,
If I was a young man again in my 20s, methinks that an enraptured state of mind would not be the outcome if I saw that woman standing there. LOL
Your total presentation will indeed have its affect on many FS readers.
Good luck in this contest.
Mark
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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hahahaha! I do like to keep it on the "leave something to the imagination" side! thanks so much! xoxoxo
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Diana. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Hello Diana. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much! These shorter ones are challenging, but I love the challenge! appreciate your feedback and stars! xoxo
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Wow! Now this is a photo that will truly get in the mood or remember the night
You captured my attention and I'm sure it did the same for others.
Thank you for sharing this romantic poem
cookie
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Wow! Now this is a photo that will truly get in the mood or remember the night
You captured my attention and I'm sure it did the same for others.
Thank you for sharing this romantic poem
cookie
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
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Your very welcome.
Cookie
