Died For Freedom
An Acrostic (in memory of all who gave their lives)45 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings..
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Oh I love this - what a brilliant acrostic. It would take many walls to record all the names of all the fallen in war. You have written this well with a very impressive and moving picture. Well done - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Oh I love this - what a brilliant acrostic. It would take many walls to record all the names of all the fallen in war. You have written this well with a very impressive and moving picture. Well done - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings..
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very clever and well written acrostic poem also very poignant. I think it is a very good entry into the competition and I love your presentation. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This is a very clever and well written acrostic poem also very poignant. I think it is a very good entry into the competition and I love your presentation. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings..
Comment from Susan Larson
This is a beautifully written acrostic poem in memory of all who served in the military. Memorizing the fallen is such a touching final line. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This is a beautifully written acrostic poem in memory of all who served in the military. Memorizing the fallen is such a touching final line. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings..
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about all the soldiers who sacrificed their lives for their country for the sake of freedom. Many others returned broken mentally or physically.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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A very well-written acrostic poem about all the soldiers who sacrificed their lives for their country for the sake of freedom. Many others returned broken mentally or physically.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...
Comment from Alchera
This standard memorial acrostic has been perfectly written throughout it three irregular structural stanzaic format and beautifully presented and described within its war tribute recognition narrative storylined content. Well done. I did like it all.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This standard memorial acrostic has been perfectly written throughout it three irregular structural stanzaic format and beautifully presented and described within its war tribute recognition narrative storylined content. Well done. I did like it all.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...
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You are welcomed!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
It doesn't matter how many years have pass the heart ache and pain shall for ever last. I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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It doesn't matter how many years have pass the heart ache and pain shall for ever last. I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good memorial for all who died in Vietnam of any war. They all go so young and die in much higher numbers than we want to imagine. The wall is a humbling monument to be near. But today we have to say men and women die. This is a well done acrostic and fits the contest well.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This is a good memorial for all who died in Vietnam of any war. They all go so young and die in much higher numbers than we want to imagine. The wall is a humbling monument to be near. But today we have to say men and women die. This is a well done acrostic and fits the contest well.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings..
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Died for Freedom is a powerful tribute to those fallen in war for their country. In the last few years I found it heart wrenching to see and hear unpatriotic words and actions by many of today's future leaders. They need this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Died for Freedom is a powerful tribute to those fallen in war for their country. In the last few years I found it heart wrenching to see and hear unpatriotic words and actions by many of today's future leaders. They need this poem.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated
Blessings..
Comment from RShipp
"Intrepid heroes...war heavy on their shoulders" What a grand line!
A perfect picture to illustrate the context of your poem.
Job well done.
Best of luck in the In Their Memory writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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"Intrepid heroes...war heavy on their shoulders" What a grand line!
A perfect picture to illustrate the context of your poem.
Job well done.
Best of luck in the In Their Memory writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings..
