Winter Splendor
Winter snow and roses45 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your haiku is descriptive and lovely. When we are shivering and hovering inside, we must remember that nature is preparing the earth to produce those lovely spring elements we're waiting eagerly for.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Your haiku is descriptive and lovely. When we are shivering and hovering inside, we must remember that nature is preparing the earth to produce those lovely spring elements we're waiting eagerly for.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank uyou Janice, yhour comments to my haiku are lovely.
Comment from Minglement
I love haiku and this is no exception. It's a beautiful presentation of your touching write. You create a lovely word picture with your phraseology, even without your stunning art work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I love haiku and this is no exception. It's a beautiful presentation of your touching write. You create a lovely word picture with your phraseology, even without your stunning art work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting in this haiju.
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a beautiful Haiku. I love the line Splendor in repose. Gorgeous. You managed to find an outstanding image to complement your poem. I think this is a great contest entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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This is a beautiful Haiku. I love the line Splendor in repose. Gorgeous. You managed to find an outstanding image to complement your poem. I think this is a great contest entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting in this haiku.
Comment from Raul1
This poem is beautifully simply simply said. It is interesting and unique. Nice job. I like this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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This poem is beautifully simply simply said. It is interesting and unique. Nice job. I like this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you Raoul1 for reading my words and evaluating its significance, in nature, and in life. Such a nice review...
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You're welcome.
Comment from Joan E.
What a fascinating picture and so parallel to your 5-7-5 haiku! Your "splendor in repose" is such an appealing description and I enjoyed your use of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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What a fascinating picture and so parallel to your 5-7-5 haiku! Your "splendor in repose" is such an appealing description and I enjoyed your use of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you, dear friend.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, winter is quite definitely a time of nature's repose, there was an instruction, of leaving the fields fallow, to regain and reproduce the the goodies of fertility, now we fertilise them to dream, winter enforces that "rest", E.G. the sabbath, well done, an excellent entry. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Oh yes indeed, winter is quite definitely a time of nature's repose, there was an instruction, of leaving the fields fallow, to regain and reproduce the the goodies of fertility, now we fertilise them to dream, winter enforces that "rest", E.G. the sabbath, well done, an excellent entry. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your great support.
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Most welcome
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect mach . Your words are few yet they captured the meaning
how season has a part to play and the roses shall return next spring.
Cookie
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect mach . Your words are few yet they captured the meaning
how season has a part to play and the roses shall return next spring.
Cookie
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review, Miss Cookie.
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Your more than welcome, take care.
cookie
Comment from lance michaels
Very beautiful Haiku! It fits perfectly in the parameters of the contest. Snow disappears and spring returns. A natural progression that you described perfectly.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Very beautiful Haiku! It fits perfectly in the parameters of the contest. Snow disappears and spring returns. A natural progression that you described perfectly.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your terrific review to this haiku for a contest. Thank you.
Comment from Alchera
This haiku poetry contest entry is well set within its counting syllables structural format. Its beautiful natural description is well explained throughout its narrative storyline content. Well done.Greetings for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This haiku poetry contest entry is well set within its counting syllables structural format. Its beautiful natural description is well explained throughout its narrative storyline content. Well done.Greetings for the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Alchera. Your comments are beautiful and uplifting.
Comment from Susan Larson
How beautiful, both the picture and your words. I am trying to learn more about writing haiku and I think what I lack most is the ability to allow the reader to feel the few words that compose the brief poem . God luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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How beautiful, both the picture and your words. I am trying to learn more about writing haiku and I think what I lack most is the ability to allow the reader to feel the few words that compose the brief poem . God luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review. I learn haiku, senruy, etc from a master instructor, Alvin Elington, a couple of years ago. Unfortunately, he is no longer with us...
