Winter Splendor
Winter snow and roses45 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
Yes, the snow will be melting and watering the thirsty soil to bring on the roses and their blooms. I like ... slender in repose
The entire presentation is lovely.
Drew
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Yes, the snow will be melting and watering the thirsty soil to bring on the roses and their blooms. I like ... slender in repose
The entire presentation is lovely.
Drew
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Drew, you captured the mood of this haiku so well. Awesome.
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely haiku Amada. The picture is perfect for this well written piece.
The first two lines are grammatically connected beautifully and the satori line is delightful.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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A lovely haiku Amada. The picture is perfect for this well written piece.
The first two lines are grammatically connected beautifully and the satori line is delightful.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my work and your awesome comments.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lovely poem, though succinct, it easily captures the beauty of the scene in tentative optimism, an easy view of an anticipated future - fully compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, a lovely poem, though succinct, it easily captures the beauty of the scene in tentative optimism, an easy view of an anticipated future - fully compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my work and catching the veiled promise of nature's renewal.
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You are very welcome, Amada, a lovely and interestingly conceptual write...Eve
Comment from Patty Palmer
Amazingly beautiful! The snow caked on the rose isn't something you see every day. It reminds me of a children's fairy tale. I believe it was Snow White who went into a coma and the dwarves covered her snow-covered body with red roses? Anyway, that's the picture that comes to mind for me.
Patty
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Amazingly beautiful! The snow caked on the rose isn't something you see every day. It reminds me of a children's fairy tale. I believe it was Snow White who went into a coma and the dwarves covered her snow-covered body with red roses? Anyway, that's the picture that comes to mind for me.
Patty
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your so awesome commets. Yes, I had in mind a little touch of a fairy tale. All ends well! You caught it so well.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Amada, a terrific Thursday to you. I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing your Haiku, your syllable count was spot on and it goes perfect with the photo. Good job and have a great day!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Hello Amada, a terrific Thursday to you. I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing your Haiku, your syllable count was spot on and it goes perfect with the photo. Good job and have a great day!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you 13th poet for reading my haiku and for your encouraging words.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear amada! The descriptive words and the imagery are exquisite!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear amada! The descriptive words and the imagery are exquisite!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your exquisite comments to my haiku. It makes my day.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It is so that we can say so much with a few words and a descriptive picture. The beauty of some of the winter scenes and the job that is being done quite often escapes us. But here you have presented a huge message.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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It is so that we can say so much with a few words and a descriptive picture. The beauty of some of the winter scenes and the job that is being done quite often escapes us. But here you have presented a huge message.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thank you, writer, for catching so well the untold message in this haiku. Such a deep review. I celebrate!
Comment from Sanku
During winter the prepares itself for spring. There is reference to a season and a word picture .Your syllable count is perfect. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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During winter the prepares itself for spring. There is reference to a season and a word picture .Your syllable count is perfect. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your exqusite comments, Sanku.
Comment from Gloria ....
I always find roses in snow a pleasing image, particularly because it happens so rarely.
This is a fine entry into the contest Amada and I wish you great luck with the committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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I always find roses in snow a pleasing image, particularly because it happens so rarely.
This is a fine entry into the contest Amada and I wish you great luck with the committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thank you Gloria.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Splendor in repose, you are so right we keep the roses alive in our dreams or winters blanket. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.ð???
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Splendor in repose, you are so right we keep the roses alive in our dreams or winters blanket. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.ð???
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank Iza for your lovely comments for my rose haiku.
