Perspective
a 3 Line poem28 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Good luck in the contest with this interesting short poem, Melissa. As they say, even a broken clock is right twice a day. A colorful and interesting image to accompany your entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Good luck in the contest with this interesting short poem, Melissa. As they say, even a broken clock is right twice a day. A colorful and interesting image to accompany your entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Hi Marilyn. Fun comment on clocks being right twice a day LOL. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Therese Caron
What an interesting and imaginative poem! I never thought of clocks that way. I have often thought of trees that way. This is a great 3 Line Poetry contest entry. You have also used the perfect image. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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What an interesting and imaginative poem! I never thought of clocks that way. I have often thought of trees that way. This is a great 3 Line Poetry contest entry. You have also used the perfect image. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Hi Terry. Thanks so very much for your comments. I am glad you liked it!
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Interesting picture of the clocks, with all the different times on them. I bought my husband a clock in the shape of a ship. I love it but don't think he does! Great point in this--time too shall pass. Excellent alliteration with troublesome times. Interesting observation, and best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Interesting picture of the clocks, with all the different times on them. I bought my husband a clock in the shape of a ship. I love it but don't think he does! Great point in this--time too shall pass. Excellent alliteration with troublesome times. Interesting observation, and best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Hi Judi. Thanks so very much. I would love a ship clock ~ a very unique choice. :)
Melissa
Comment from royowen
I really like the irony written in this excellent entry in this three line poetry contest. I love this sort of entry because it magnifies the time passing, nothing more emphatically symbolic as these clocks, well done Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I really like the irony written in this excellent entry in this three line poetry contest. I love this sort of entry because it magnifies the time passing, nothing more emphatically symbolic as these clocks, well done Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Hi Roy. Thanks. I am glad you liked the clock analogy! It seemed appropriate. :)
Melissa
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Good job
Comment from Ulla
Well, I most certainly hope that to be the case, Melissa. I liked your poem a loot and it's quite unique, I think. It's a great entry for the contest an I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Well, I most certainly hope that to be the case, Melissa. I liked your poem a loot and it's quite unique, I think. It's a great entry for the contest an I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Hi Ulla. Thanks so much!! I am glad you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Great little thoughtful poem! I like your picture and putting time into perspective. You finish with the comforting adage that even this tumultuous time will pass. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Great little thoughtful poem! I like your picture and putting time into perspective. You finish with the comforting adage that even this tumultuous time will pass. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Hi Helen. I am glad you liked this philosophical verse. Much appreciated, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this poem about the passage of time and antique clocks. Of course we could be very near the end of this age. In which case, time as we know it ends. Bill
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Great job with this poem about the passage of time and antique clocks. Of course we could be very near the end of this age. In which case, time as we know it ends. Bill
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Hi Bill... yes, the Lord says there is an end and it sure seems the Biblical signs are staring us in the face. But, if not now, I am sure he wants us to calmly observe and stand sure in Him. Thanks for your review.
Melissa
Comment from juliaSjames
I enjoyed your whimsical artwork and philosophical write. Or maybe the other way around since the clocks are calm observers.
Best of luck in the contest, Melissa.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your whimsical artwork and philosophical write. Or maybe the other way around since the clocks are calm observers.
Best of luck in the contest, Melissa.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Hi Julia... thank you, sweet friend, for your lovely comments!
Melissa
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:-))
Comment from Sally Law
Well, we may pass on into eternity with our troubles, but they will be long forgotten in the light of Christ's presence. He promises to wipe every tear from our eyes. I love this photo. I'm the cherry red clock in the middle. :)
A sure winner for the three line contest, dear Melissa.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Well, we may pass on into eternity with our troubles, but they will be long forgotten in the light of Christ's presence. He promises to wipe every tear from our eyes. I love this photo. I'm the cherry red clock in the middle. :)
A sure winner for the three line contest, dear Melissa.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Hi Sally. So glad you liked it. I will always be reminded of you when I see a red clock. :). Thanks!
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
I'm sure those clocks have seen plenty of historical upheaving. in their day. Probably would have quite a few stories to tell. How everyone thought it was the end, but the world kept on going somehow. Very nicely done, a great thing to remember in these trying times.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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I'm sure those clocks have seen plenty of historical upheaving. in their day. Probably would have quite a few stories to tell. How everyone thought it was the end, but the world kept on going somehow. Very nicely done, a great thing to remember in these trying times.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Hi Misty. I agree that as we go through trouble, we must remember this is not the first time, not the last that we must handle it... time keeps passing... and hopefully, things will get better. Thank you.
