The Rainbow's End
It's not what you think18 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
This is very well-written and gives a chill with the ending you've presented. (Should it be posted on the poetry side with all the rhyming? Just wondering.) I think you're learning a lot with your 'The Hellacious Horror Club'. Spooky! :-)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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This is very well-written and gives a chill with the ending you've presented. (Should it be posted on the poetry side with all the rhyming? Just wondering.) I think you're learning a lot with your 'The Hellacious Horror Club'. Spooky! :-)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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when you post for the club it is put in the story section, you can't make it a poem for some reason, =[ . Thanks so much.
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Ahhhh, I understand!
Comment from Teri7
Rox, This is a very interesting and cute poem you have penned about the rainbow's end. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Rox, This is a very interesting and cute poem you have penned about the rainbow's end. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you dear.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Roxanna, yeah, I do believe you're getting quite good at this. I did like your free verse poem about what you might find at the end of the rainbow. Well done. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Hi Roxanna, yeah, I do believe you're getting quite good at this. I did like your free verse poem about what you might find at the end of the rainbow. Well done. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Don't go to the rainbow's end!! =] Thank you dear.
Comment from royowen
I'm glad you can write horror dear Rox, I can't for the life of me. (Or the death of me if you prefer. This is a scary episode my friend, I've never been to the end of the rainbow, so I don't know what's there. Beautifully written my friend Rox, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I'm glad you can write horror dear Rox, I can't for the life of me. (Or the death of me if you prefer. This is a scary episode my friend, I've never been to the end of the rainbow, so I don't know what's there. Beautifully written my friend Rox, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I haven't written much horror but find I'm not bad at doing so. Is that a good thing? =] Thank you sir.
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Well done Rox
Comment from Sally Law
Oh my. This is scary stuff. I dint know if the wee green men are up to cannibalism. I like to think of them in the better sense and not my worst nightmare. It's not what I thought. I still love you though.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Oh my. This is scary stuff. I dint know if the wee green men are up to cannibalism. I like to think of them in the better sense and not my worst nightmare. It's not what I thought. I still love you though.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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They will eat you. Don't near the rainbow's end. Actually, I'm just spreading this rumor so I can have all the gold to myself. =] Thank you.
Comment from Bill Pinder
I liked this horror and thriller poetry that is partly humorous. I liked reading your notes too. Thanks for sharing the creativity combined with your Dark side. Bill
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I liked this horror and thriller poetry that is partly humorous. I liked reading your notes too. Thanks for sharing the creativity combined with your Dark side. Bill
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much Bill. =]
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this piece. It is nice that you found the perfect illustration to go along with your post. The meter is a little rough and the place I would recommend focusing your attention in revision. The clubs sound like a lot of fun.
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing this piece. It is nice that you found the perfect illustration to go along with your post. The meter is a little rough and the place I would recommend focusing your attention in revision. The clubs sound like a lot of fun.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Oh, I thought my meter was beater, I mean better this time. Rats. Thanks so much. Rox
Comment from papa55mike
Well, that's a new take on rainbows. What a wonderfully written story. Thanks for sharing about the bad ones. Best of luck with your writing!
Please pray for Nashville!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Well, that's a new take on rainbows. What a wonderfully written story. Thanks for sharing about the bad ones. Best of luck with your writing!
Please pray for Nashville!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Yes, so sorry about the tornadoes there. So sad! Will be praying. Thank you.
