The Rainbow's End
It's not what you think18 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
Pretty good it right. You're an A plus story teller with top rated couplets. Wouldn't Dean have loved this. I'll never look at rainbows the same way again!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Pretty good it right. You're an A plus story teller with top rated couplets. Wouldn't Dean have loved this. I'll never look at rainbows the same way again!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much. Just a bit of fun. Hope you are doing well. All that is going on right now is so crazy. I'm working from home. So strange. I hope you take care and am thinking of you. Roxanna
Comment from Anne B Francis
Oh dear you have stolen my believe in rainbows, not the pot of gold that bothers me, but just the thought of how beautiful it looks in the sky.
Leprechauns, little urchins up to no good mischief makers blessed with the Irish blarney - But of course there are the good ones who slide down rainbows and dance around fairy rings
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Oh dear you have stolen my believe in rainbows, not the pot of gold that bothers me, but just the thought of how beautiful it looks in the sky.
Leprechauns, little urchins up to no good mischief makers blessed with the Irish blarney - But of course there are the good ones who slide down rainbows and dance around fairy rings
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Yes, there is always good and bad, too bad. =] Thanks dear.
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh, no! I've always heard that leprechauns were tricksters, and those were the normal leprechauns. This puts a whole new spin on it--evil leprechauns who want to roast you. Yikes!
This is a great entry for the prompt.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Oh, no! I've always heard that leprechauns were tricksters, and those were the normal leprechauns. This puts a whole new spin on it--evil leprechauns who want to roast you. Yikes!
This is a great entry for the prompt.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Beware the evil leprechauns!! =] Thank you dear.
Comment from Mistydawn
I'm really starting to worry about you now, lol. Maybe you shouldn't read about granny she might give you a few bad ideas, lol. Your poem is very well-written, interesting, colorful. Great imagery. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I'm really starting to worry about you now, lol. Maybe you shouldn't read about granny she might give you a few bad ideas, lol. Your poem is very well-written, interesting, colorful. Great imagery. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I've always been worried about me. =] Too much Dateline. =] Thank you dear.
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That explains a lot, lol.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Your dark side is coming out. You did a great job with your Leprechcans doubles. Yuck, flesh eaters paint a very nasty picture in our minds. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Your dark side is coming out. You did a great job with your Leprechcans doubles. Yuck, flesh eaters paint a very nasty picture in our minds. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Beware the evil Leprechauns! =] Thank you. Rox
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written horror poem about the viability of the leprechauns where the author warns the reader not to believe everything we hear about the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow and the magical leprechauns that are seemingly harmless.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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A very well-written horror poem about the viability of the leprechauns where the author warns the reader not to believe everything we hear about the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow and the magical leprechauns that are seemingly harmless.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Always beware! =] Thank you.
Comment from robyn corum
Rox,
I find that it can be a little scary to discover exactly what all is up there when we become willing to really, REALLY unlock that door and take a good hard look.
No, no. We do not have to reveal all we see.
Well. Not all at once, anyway. Hehehe
Need a quilt, by any chance? I happen to have one I can let you have for cheap. No??
Hmmm. Then sleep tight.
Maybe?
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Rox,
I find that it can be a little scary to discover exactly what all is up there when we become willing to really, REALLY unlock that door and take a good hard look.
No, no. We do not have to reveal all we see.
Well. Not all at once, anyway. Hehehe
Need a quilt, by any chance? I happen to have one I can let you have for cheap. No??
Hmmm. Then sleep tight.
Maybe?
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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No, I don't need anymore quilts. =] Thank you dear.
Comment from Michele Harber
You weren't kidding about your dark side, were you, Rox? The "problem" is that you're so cute and funny that even your dark poems have a light side that makes me smile. This actually is an eerie story, what with the "evil twins," their "evening meal" and the "eyes, and bone and matted hair." Of course, when you add lines like, "Upon seeing one, I'd run fast as I could," it becomes obvious that you're writing with a wink and a smile, so nothing becomes too scary or too uninviting. In other words, you've come up with a good, spooky story, but one I wouldn't be afraid to read to an older child.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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You weren't kidding about your dark side, were you, Rox? The "problem" is that you're so cute and funny that even your dark poems have a light side that makes me smile. This actually is an eerie story, what with the "evil twins," their "evening meal" and the "eyes, and bone and matted hair." Of course, when you add lines like, "Upon seeing one, I'd run fast as I could," it becomes obvious that you're writing with a wink and a smile, so nothing becomes too scary or too uninviting. In other words, you've come up with a good, spooky story, but one I wouldn't be afraid to read to an older child.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Having a dark side can be fun. =] Thank you my dear.
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Yes, I too know about that dark side (see says as she twirls her evil villain mustache).
You're very welcome, Rox.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a really great little poem with a horror twist. I don't understand why it isn't on the Lucky Leprechaun contest. This would be a great entry Maybe you can only enter it it one thing. I enjoyed reading it.
Beth
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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This is a really great little poem with a horror twist. I don't understand why it isn't on the Lucky Leprechaun contest. This would be a great entry Maybe you can only enter it it one thing. I enjoyed reading it.
Beth
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I didn't know about the Lucky Leprechaun contest. Hummm. Thanks so much.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
OMG! I love it! Perfect for our challenge! I ain't going to find that pot O' gold now! Forget it! Beautifully done my friend! You definitely make me want to run! Haha
Thank you for your awesome offering! xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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OMG! I love it! Perfect for our challenge! I ain't going to find that pot O' gold now! Forget it! Beautifully done my friend! You definitely make me want to run! Haha
Thank you for your awesome offering! xoxo
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Don't go near any pots of gold! Thank you. Rox
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haha!! only if they are in my bank account! lol! - but that ain't happen'! tee hee
