Broken
Old, worn out, broken.66 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Oh, this is so sad to read. What a heartbroken poem this is. It leaves me almost bereft of words. Linda, I do hope that this is not biographical. It's wonderfully written. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Oh, this is so sad to read. What a heartbroken poem this is. It leaves me almost bereft of words. Linda, I do hope that this is not biographical. It's wonderfully written. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Ulla. Linda
Comment from jenintorre
'Broken' is a very discriptive poem and also very depressing. I hope it isn't autobiographical. Very well chosen artwork to enhance the powerful words.
Take care. Jen.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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'Broken' is a very discriptive poem and also very depressing. I hope it isn't autobiographical. Very well chosen artwork to enhance the powerful words.
Take care. Jen.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you. Linda
Comment from papa55mike
This poem is Haunting! What a wonderfully written piece and I see why you used the picture. Best of luck with your writing!
Please pray for Nashville!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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This poem is Haunting! What a wonderfully written piece and I see why you used the picture. Best of luck with your writing!
Please pray for Nashville!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, papa. Linda
Comment from Gail Denham
Broken - and you used the airplane anedote to describe how someone feels who's been put through the wringer too many times. Good poem to bring this home.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Broken - and you used the airplane anedote to describe how someone feels who's been put through the wringer too many times. Good poem to bring this home.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, Gail, for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I do hope this isn't true for you, but just an artistic creation. Though it is true for too many, there is always hope. This is very well done, I saw nothing that I could add to improve it.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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I do hope this isn't true for you, but just an artistic creation. Though it is true for too many, there is always hope. This is very well done, I saw nothing that I could add to improve it.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Linda. The picture used is very expressive. It certainly sets a mood for the writing.
Your descriptive narrative of how broken "feels" is quite good.
You compare the feelings of brokenness to things we can all identify with. Excellent poem. I like the way you constructed the phrasing.
Robert
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Hello Linda. The picture used is very expressive. It certainly sets a mood for the writing.
Your descriptive narrative of how broken "feels" is quite good.
You compare the feelings of brokenness to things we can all identify with. Excellent poem. I like the way you constructed the phrasing.
Robert
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, Robert, for your detailed review. Linda
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You're welcome
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Thank you, Robert. Linda
Comment from Sally Law
Powerful, Miss Linda. In many ways, we are all broken at one time or another. It is true strength that reaches past the brokemess and begins to move us to live again. Sending you my best today for this marvelous work.
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Powerful, Miss Linda. In many ways, we are all broken at one time or another. It is true strength that reaches past the brokemess and begins to move us to live again. Sending you my best today for this marvelous work.
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, Sally Law, for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Linda, this is a well written, but very sad poem. I do hope it is not biographical. Good use of simile in your first two couplets. A very revealing picture which tells a story of misery, without words. A good poem and I enjoyed the read. Warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Hello Linda, this is a well written, but very sad poem. I do hope it is not biographical. Good use of simile in your first two couplets. A very revealing picture which tells a story of misery, without words. A good poem and I enjoyed the read. Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Dorothy, thank you for your kind words. Linda
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello LivelyLinda, a terrific Tuesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poem, it had a good flow and rhymes. Though it was sad, it was a good, well-written poem. Good job and have a great day!
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Hello LivelyLinda, a terrific Tuesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poem, it had a good flow and rhymes. Though it was sad, it was a good, well-written poem. Good job and have a great day!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you for your kind words. Linda
Comment from June Sargent
This is so sad and touching. The human spirit can take only so much abuse and then it shatters. Hopefully some tender loving care over time can restore some of the salvageable parts. Nothing is impossible...
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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This is so sad and touching. The human spirit can take only so much abuse and then it shatters. Hopefully some tender loving care over time can restore some of the salvageable parts. Nothing is impossible...
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, June. Linda
