haiku (rain clouds hover)
haiku28 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
Petrichor- what a wonderful smell! I did not know this word! Thanks for teh vocabulary enhancing!!
The Blue Ridge Mountains are a wonderful place to live!!!
Best of luck in the Haiku Poetry Contest contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Petrichor- what a wonderful smell! I did not know this word! Thanks for teh vocabulary enhancing!!
The Blue Ridge Mountains are a wonderful place to live!!!
Best of luck in the Haiku Poetry Contest contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I agree, the Blue Ridge Mountain area is a wonderful place to live.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Bichon
I really liked this short haiku. It matched the haiku format perfectly and really painted an image in the readers mind. I love the use of "petrichor" too!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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I really liked this short haiku. It matched the haiku format perfectly and really painted an image in the readers mind. I love the use of "petrichor" too!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
You understand how the haiku works, it isn't always that one comes across a word they don't know, (except for Lynochka, Helen) beautifully written my friend, "petrichor" I'll have remember that one, brilliant entry, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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You understand how the haiku works, it isn't always that one comes across a word they don't know, (except for Lynochka, Helen) beautifully written my friend, "petrichor" I'll have remember that one, brilliant entry, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Roy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I am profoundly impressed to think that I could teach you a word. :))))
Blessings dear friend,
Janet
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Bless you Janet,
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Janet.
-A well written haiku
with good syllable count,
nature, and seasonal imagery.
-I like the topic and the place.
-We can anticipate the rain
because of the scent in the air.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Janet.
-A well written haiku
with good syllable count,
nature, and seasonal imagery.
-I like the topic and the place.
-We can anticipate the rain
because of the scent in the air.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Pam for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome, Janet.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is a very beautiful and well written Haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Teri for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Janet. I too am familiar with that smell after a rainstorm. If there has been lightning in the area it's actually ozone.
Your haiku poem appears to meet the standard for the poem. I don't write haiku because I've been told I don't meet the standard in virtually every one I've written.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Hello Janet. I too am familiar with that smell after a rainstorm. If there has been lightning in the area it's actually ozone.
Your haiku poem appears to meet the standard for the poem. I don't write haiku because I've been told I don't meet the standard in virtually every one I've written.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Robert for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
I didn't know about the lightning in the area and it being the ozone. I learn something everyday here.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome Janet.
Comment from Minglement
I really enjoyed this lovely read on one of my favorite things - the scent borne on rain-freshed air. I love that there's a word for it, a word I first discovered when looking for a good obscure word :) Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed this lovely read on one of my favorite things - the scent borne on rain-freshed air. I love that there's a word for it, a word I first discovered when looking for a good obscure word :) Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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youbare most welcome :)
Comment from Gail Denham
True - the smell after the rain - it's something special - glad you defined that word for us. Good poem and the picture with it also. I've always wanted to see those mountains - but we have great ones in the Northwest as well.
Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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True - the smell after the rain - it's something special - glad you defined that word for us. Good poem and the picture with it also. I've always wanted to see those mountains - but we have great ones in the Northwest as well.
Good job.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Gail for your thoughtful and encouraging review. You do have beautiful mountains in the northwest. I love to visit there but have not for many years.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your haiku. It is in good form. Your words flow well and paint a picture for readers even if a picture had not been included. However, you picture is beautiful and a good pairing with you words. I like the way your satori reads--petrichor--it is a good choice. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your haiku. It is in good form. Your words flow well and paint a picture for readers even if a picture had not been included. However, you picture is beautiful and a good pairing with you words. I like the way your satori reads--petrichor--it is a good choice. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Jan for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Yes, the smell of rain coming. Mother painted five horses running free and happy under stormy black clouds.She told me when I was nine that I too am like the wild horses when it's going to rain--running around everywhere free and full of laughter. Your words and picture brought back lovely memories of home. Thank you.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Yes, the smell of rain coming. Mother painted five horses running free and happy under stormy black clouds.She told me when I was nine that I too am like the wild horses when it's going to rain--running around everywhere free and full of laughter. Your words and picture brought back lovely memories of home. Thank you.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I am so pleased that this resonated with you and brought back happy memories.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome.
