Break Of Dawn
A 2/4/2 poem contest entry22 total reviews
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent poem for a two-four-two poetry contest. The color scheme goes very well with the words. I can feel the dampness. I can smell the vegetation. If I am quiet enough, I can hear the dripping. It has touched my senses. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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This is an excellent poem for a two-four-two poetry contest. The color scheme goes very well with the words. I can feel the dampness. I can smell the vegetation. If I am quiet enough, I can hear the dripping. It has touched my senses. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review. :) You have the reaction that I was trying to offer the reader so I am very happy. Thank you for the six stars!
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Well deserved, keep it up.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the fresh dew drop hanging on the leave ready to fall at any moment when dawn arrives to announce the new day.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the fresh dew drop hanging on the leave ready to fall at any moment when dawn arrives to announce the new day.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review. :)
Comment from Boogienights
A lovely picture.. another reminder of spring. A very nice contest entry with the correct amount of sllyables. I think it will do well. Good luck!!!! :)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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A lovely picture.. another reminder of spring. A very nice contest entry with the correct amount of sllyables. I think it will do well. Good luck!!!! :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You have written this
well with effective use
of one continuous thought,
and a good topic.
-Good use of alliteration,
and your concluding word
creates a picture of this
dripping dewdrop.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You have written this
well with effective use
of one continuous thought,
and a good topic.
-Good use of alliteration,
and your concluding word
creates a picture of this
dripping dewdrop.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those dew drops have a habit of hanging on and quenching the thirst of plant life and you brought the to my eyes here with your few words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Those dew drops have a habit of hanging on and quenching the thirst of plant life and you brought the to my eyes here with your few words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from June Sargent
You have certainly succeeded in meeting this challenge! Some of the short ones I have read make no sense. Your piece manages to paint a lovely lyrical picture in three lines. Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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You have certainly succeeded in meeting this challenge! Some of the short ones I have read make no sense. Your piece manages to paint a lovely lyrical picture in three lines. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Therese Caron
I love that challenge also, and have not written any lately. This one is beautiful, so simple and creative. It is an accurate description of beautiful nature, with the image, font, and colors all creating a lovely presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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I love that challenge also, and have not written any lately. This one is beautiful, so simple and creative. It is an accurate description of beautiful nature, with the image, font, and colors all creating a lovely presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Susan Larson
The picture you chose goes perfectly with your poem. Or is it the other way around? The poem you wrote goes perfectly with the picture you chose? Either way, it all hangs together beautifully.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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The picture you chose goes perfectly with your poem. Or is it the other way around? The poem you wrote goes perfectly with the picture you chose? Either way, it all hangs together beautifully.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊...the poem came first.
Comment from Minglement
This is an intriguing entry for the 2-4-2 syllable poem contest. It reminds me of a true haiku, capturing and painting an image of nature, like a snapshot in a few syllables, though here, you have even less. You perfectly captured that split second in nature and made me say, ahhhh... good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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This is an intriguing entry for the 2-4-2 syllable poem contest. It reminds me of a true haiku, capturing and painting an image of nature, like a snapshot in a few syllables, though here, you have even less. You perfectly captured that split second in nature and made me say, ahhhh... good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review and for noticing it's a haiku.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
As you say, it is an art to do this, and one that you have done to perfection, with an illustration that looks as if it were made for the text.
The only thing I find negative is that you could have put your title/subtitle to better use, to add information, rather than merely repeating information that is elswhere e.g. use "dawn in nature"
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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As you say, it is an art to do this, and one that you have done to perfection, with an illustration that looks as if it were made for the text.
The only thing I find negative is that you could have put your title/subtitle to better use, to add information, rather than merely repeating information that is elswhere e.g. use "dawn in nature"
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review and feed back... I'll take a look at the title.
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Thank you very much for the six stars
