The Book of Miracles
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Comment from Raul1
This person is compared to the Mona Lisa. She must feel very lucky. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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This person is compared to the Mona Lisa. She must feel very lucky. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, have a blessed week end.
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You're welcome and thank you!
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Amusing anecdote about married life, and one man's strategy on how to survive his wife's bad moods -- narrated from the wife's perspective! Apparently there is sometimes a subtext to our spoken responses and facial expressions that we ourselves do not realize, but that those closest to us know all too well! Very well written.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Amusing anecdote about married life, and one man's strategy on how to survive his wife's bad moods -- narrated from the wife's perspective! Apparently there is sometimes a subtext to our spoken responses and facial expressions that we ourselves do not realize, but that those closest to us know all too well! Very well written.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Ms. Mary:)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Mona Lisa mon amour
Hello, Iza Deleanu,
Your poem/story cracked me up. I know exactly what you mean. I think all women have that mona lisa smile. Poor husbands.... lol Well done my friend. I like the presentation too.
gypsy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Mona Lisa mon amour
Hello, Iza Deleanu,
Your poem/story cracked me up. I know exactly what you mean. I think all women have that mona lisa smile. Poor husbands.... lol Well done my friend. I like the presentation too.
gypsy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Please forgive me for my delay and thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Have a blessed day
Comment from estory
Told with wit and sarcasm this is a great narrative of married life and the ways husbands and wives use body language to send messages about creating and maintaining their space in the relationship and articulating their frustrations with each other. Yes, that smile can mean many different things. estory
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Told with wit and sarcasm this is a great narrative of married life and the ways husbands and wives use body language to send messages about creating and maintaining their space in the relationship and articulating their frustrations with each other. Yes, that smile can mean many different things. estory
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Unfortunately we seems to lose our self once we stepped in the wholly matrimony and everything becomes a battle for power
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your look of suspicion and critique is obviously a sarcastic smile! The cynicism enters the marriage after honeymoon period and finds itself at a crossroads and the path it takes from then on can go two different ways, either uphill or downhill, I enjoyed your words here and hope your Mona Lisa smile has at least some positivity, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Your look of suspicion and critique is obviously a sarcastic smile! The cynicism enters the marriage after honeymoon period and finds itself at a crossroads and the path it takes from then on can go two different ways, either uphill or downhill, I enjoyed your words here and hope your Mona Lisa smile has at least some positivity, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Life is not always a happy story, but we need to fight for what we believe
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Thank you:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
yeah, I'm thinking there's not a whole lotta hope for these two if they don't open up to each other and clear the air.... certainly an interesting 'poetry' offering as it seems a lot better suited for a prose offering...??? Thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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yeah, I'm thinking there's not a whole lotta hope for these two if they don't open up to each other and clear the air.... certainly an interesting 'poetry' offering as it seems a lot better suited for a prose offering...??? Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for stopping by and for your honest review
