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The Book of Miracles

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The adventures of Eastern European in America

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Comment from Puzzle
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Omg girl lol. I can completely relate to this. This is exactly why I'm on this site! I need an outlet for all of this romance I keep cooped up inside myself. I like your positive outlook. I struggle with this tho.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    I know sometime you have to think alone or with somebody who is just there...
Comment from estory
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It's a great moral tale of the practical vs. the romantic. Sometimes all that glitters is not gold, and the practical can give you a comfortable, if not exciting life. I think your grammar is improving and there's just a couple of little nits. 'choose/ chose'. estory

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
    Once a romantic twice a lunatic, so better a pragmatic:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I takes a while to get to know someone and rushing into marriage is a mistake, but it seems you have both found your own peace inside this marriage. No relationship is full of romance though, it relies on the practicalities to make it work. Your writing is honest and real, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
    So true my dear friend
Comment from royowen
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It's amazing what people will do for love, including hang around until it happens. But of course if there are a few countries in the promise of a pragmatic decision could certainly help, well done Iza, good job, blessings. Roy
Typo : Spending my (innocence) years. Innocent?

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
    Thank you Mr, Roy, as always, I really appreciate your feedback
reply by royowen on 02-Mar-2020
    Goo job