A Hint of Spring
a Rispetto about robins31 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem "A Hint of Spring" It flows well with a nice story about robins and it rhymes well enhancing the quality of your poem. I like your artwork choice. It goes well with your message. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed reading your poem "A Hint of Spring" It flows well with a nice story about robins and it rhymes well enhancing the quality of your poem. I like your artwork choice. It goes well with your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed the flow and rhymes of A HINT OF SPRING, angel. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I like the contrast between the still evident reminders of winter with the robin, which all by itself can remind us spring is coming. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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I like the contrast between the still evident reminders of winter with the robin, which all by itself can remind us spring is coming. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Darlene, for sharing my Rispetto. I am delighted you enjoyed the contrasts.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is airy, fresh, and very delightful. Those robins congregating in the yard is a welcome sign that Spring is definitely near. You've done a fine job also with the smooth and seamless rhyme and flow of this. Thanks for sharing this well written work that gives us anticipation for Spring's arrival. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is airy, fresh, and very delightful. Those robins congregating in the yard is a welcome sign that Spring is definitely near. You've done a fine job also with the smooth and seamless rhyme and flow of this. Thanks for sharing this well written work that gives us anticipation for Spring's arrival. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Jeffrey, for your very kind praise of my Rispetto.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing my rispetto and your kind praise.
Comment from Lu Saluna
The appearance of robins is definitely a sign of spring. I like your poem, it is light and airy. It has a good rhyme and meter and reads very smoothly.
Only one word I might change,
"Their call until they all took wing"
change to:
"They call until they all took wing"
I know you probably didn't want to repear the word "they" but it does sound better.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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The appearance of robins is definitely a sign of spring. I like your poem, it is light and airy. It has a good rhyme and meter and reads very smoothly.
Only one word I might change,
"Their call until they all took wing"
change to:
"They call until they all took wing"
I know you probably didn't want to repear the word "they" but it does sound better.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Around here, we are still seeking hints of spring. I am delighted you enjoyed my rispetto, Lu, and truly appreciate the suggestion.
Comment from Stephanie Paige
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I too love to watch the robins during winter because it means spring is not far away. This is a great entry for the two stanza poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. I too love to watch the robins during winter because it means spring is not far away. This is a great entry for the two stanza poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my rispetto, Stephanie. Many thanks for your very kind praise.
Comment from Bichon
This was a very beautiful poem. I loved the neatly written two stanzas and the smooth flowing rhyming scheme that really highlighted the poem. Great job!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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This was a very beautiful poem. I loved the neatly written two stanzas and the smooth flowing rhyming scheme that really highlighted the poem. Great job!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I am delighted you like my rispetto so much, Bichon. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Gail Denham
Good job and sure made me long for spring - for freshness in the air - for the earth to dry a bit - we have lakes where the snow was. but our soil is very porous so it dries quickly.
The sign of robins and thrushes is a great thing to look forward to.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Good job and sure made me long for spring - for freshness in the air - for the earth to dry a bit - we have lakes where the snow was. but our soil is very porous so it dries quickly.
The sign of robins and thrushes is a great thing to look forward to.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I am delighted I could give you reason to anticipate Spring. Thank you for sharing my rispetto.
Comment from Aphthong
Wow.. That is a fantastic write about the expected spring.. You created beautiful imagery and positive vibe through out the lines.. Great entry in the contest.. Good luck poet..
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Wow.. That is a fantastic write about the expected spring.. You created beautiful imagery and positive vibe through out the lines.. Great entry in the contest.. Good luck poet..
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Aphthong, for your kind praise of A HINT OF SPRING.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"A Hint of Spring", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review, Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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"A Hint of Spring", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review, Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I am so pleased you enjoyed A HINT OF SPRING, Duchess. Thank you for your very kind praise.
DEAR ANON,
YOU CERTAINLY DESERVED THE FINE PRAISE.
GOD BLESS AND BEST WISHES,
THE DUCHESS
