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ice fire

Are they Satan's disciples roaring?

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written haiku about ice and fire that start quakes and winds can it be caused by Satan's disciples roaring or is it God who let His wrath come down to us for our disobedience.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Sandra, as always, your words are inspiring. Thank you for reading my work. Your stars are wonderful.
Comment from heavenempress
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Exceptional piece of poetry. I enjoyed the simple but vivid expression. Nice work for meditation and reflection. Excellent use of vocabulary and fair image. Keep it up!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much for reading my poem. Your comments are inspiring and your stars are wonderful.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I hear about the wrath of God and then on the underhand I hear that he is all forgiving and welcoming and the two sound like human emotions to me. I enjoyed your Haiku as it made me think Henry, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Dolly, thank you very much for reading my poem. The poem did what I wanted - readers to think. Your comments are inspiring and your stars are awesome.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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I don't know; actually, I think it's too soon to tell. We have always had these diverse types of extreme weather in our world. How are satan's disciples roaring? Well I guess sometimes they do, like in the media -- but many times they also function quietly in the background, hoping we won't notice. "The world" and the things of the world have been around since the beginning of recorded time. The devil has really been pushing his agenda for that long. Spiritual warfare is nothing new. There may be more quakes and fires, though, as we get closer to the end times. I don't think God is very happy with His creation.

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much for reading my poem. That small piece did what I wanted it to do - it makes readers think. Your stars are wonderful. There is a Bible verse ? Satan's disciples roar like lions seeking someone to devour.
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 28-Feb-2020
    You're very welcome, Henry. You're right that the Bible compares satan to a roaring lion. I know the verse you mean. We have to watch our backs these days. "Watch and pray," as Jesus said.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    :)
Comment from Minglement
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Interesting question you pose in this insightful entry for the Haiku contest. This is much deeper than most haiku (and any I've ever written). I appreciate your author notes. It's a great entry and I wish you luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Minglement, thank you for reading my poem. That short piece did what I wanted it to do - it makes readers think. Thank you for your wonderful stars.
reply by Minglement on 29-Feb-2020
    You're very welcome. Nice style. I hope to read more of your work. I like something that works my brain :)
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
    Inspiring :)
reply by Minglement on 29-Feb-2020
    ;)
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
    MMmm, a wink and a smile. Thanks.
reply by Minglement on 29-Feb-2020
    Have a blessed day :)