The Garden of Spring
The feelings I feel when Spring sings to me.11 total reviews
Comment from Carl DeVere
This is very sweet and a cheerful reminder of the special joy of change that comes with Spring...especially as relief from "Old Man Winter." I'm just wondering about this line:
The sun smiles with sunshine.
Maybe it could smile with some description of something other than itself--like "radiance" maybe.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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This is very sweet and a cheerful reminder of the special joy of change that comes with Spring...especially as relief from "Old Man Winter." I'm just wondering about this line:
The sun smiles with sunshine.
Maybe it could smile with some description of something other than itself--like "radiance" maybe.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you Carl. I'm glad you liked it.
