The Garden of Spring
The feelings I feel when Spring sings to me.11 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
Your picture matched your poem nicely.
You did a good job at avoiding the banished words.
"The trees are moist with its mist." My favorite line.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Your picture matched your poem nicely.
You did a good job at avoiding the banished words.
"The trees are moist with its mist." My favorite line.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This springtime poem, The Garden of Spring, brings many of life's enchantments back into our consciousness. God's words speak loudly here.
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This springtime poem, The Garden of Spring, brings many of life's enchantments back into our consciousness. God's words speak loudly here.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank Bill glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Poem for Spring writing prompt.
This well written verse tells of some of the wonders of springtime.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Poem for Spring writing prompt.
This well written verse tells of some of the wonders of springtime.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you Sharon I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Sun smiling through its sunshine. I love the image. I also love the lines about loving your neighbor as you love your garden. Since I'm not much of a gardener, it doesn't apply to me, but say, to love my neighbor as much as I love poetry . . . to give as much care and attention to them . . .
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Sun smiling through its sunshine. I love the image. I also love the lines about loving your neighbor as you love your garden. Since I'm not much of a gardener, it doesn't apply to me, but say, to love my neighbor as much as I love poetry . . . to give as much care and attention to them . . .
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you Darlene I'm glad you liked it.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem for Spring when the fields seem to come alive with green and colorful splashes with a bright blue skies as the background for the wonderful scene.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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A very well-written poem for Spring when the fields seem to come alive with green and colorful splashes with a bright blue skies as the background for the wonderful scene.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you Sandra. Spring is in the air. :)
Comment from Ralf Skiles
This poem was so lovely! The imagery was spectacular. I am part of the unfortunate group of people still waiting for spring to come but this poem got so much more excited.
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This poem was so lovely! The imagery was spectacular. I am part of the unfortunate group of people still waiting for spring to come but this poem got so much more excited.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Don't worry Ralf. Spring will shower you with kindness. Glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet write about spring and I loved the last few lines about loving one's neighbour, considering others is unselfish and rewarding, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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This is a sweet write about spring and I loved the last few lines about loving one's neighbour, considering others is unselfish and rewarding, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you Dolly. You got summer over the pond? Hope it's not too harsh. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Garden of Spring is a beautiful poem about spring. It's a fine entry for the spring poem contest. Good job my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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The Garden of Spring is a beautiful poem about spring. It's a fine entry for the spring poem contest. Good job my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you Gypsy. Spring is bringing its tender touch to all those that love it. :) Glad you liked it.
Comment from judelesemann
I would have liked this better if you had started with "Spring, what a wonderful time of year. " and then ended with the same. You express yourself very poetically but perhaps you could have consolidated some of it to be more effective. All and all a nice poem. Be blessed, Jude
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I would have liked this better if you had started with "Spring, what a wonderful time of year. " and then ended with the same. You express yourself very poetically but perhaps you could have consolidated some of it to be more effective. All and all a nice poem. Be blessed, Jude
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you jude.
Comment from Gloria ....
So delightfully uplifting this poem is. I feel like dancing just reading all the fine imagery and sensory experiences of spring. No wonder it is called the time for love.
Great job author and best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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So delightfully uplifting this poem is. I feel like dancing just reading all the fine imagery and sensory experiences of spring. No wonder it is called the time for love.
Great job author and best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you Gloria. Hope Spring has touched your home. :) Glad you liked it.
