Comment from RShipp

Excellent

Your picture matched your poem nicely.

You did a good job at avoiding the banished words.

"Inside homes, people with the winter blues,
Materialize in happier, more joyful moods."
What a truth!!!

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

Spring certainly brings a brighter look at everything!! ;) A joyful collection of rhyme that seems to follow a rhyming pattern, of sorts, but the last line is almost stilted with its 'non-rhyme'... perhaps something like 'Everything in spring improves our attitudes' or 'Everything in spring helps to amuse'.... suggestions only to bring rhyme to complete your pattern of: aaabbccdd(?) in to aaabbccddd.... Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls.... :)

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Excellent

Good Spring Writing entry. I wish you well in the contest.
Your poem was written well following the entry guidelines.
Your thoughts were easily displayed and understood.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020

Thanks for the review.