The Ides of March
The taming of the lion, the lamb springs forth45 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Such imagery! Crickets and frogs--things of my childhood days. Doing a syllable count looks hard. Your poem is centered beautifully. I enjoyed this short poem. Good post.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Such imagery! Crickets and frogs--things of my childhood days. Doing a syllable count looks hard. Your poem is centered beautifully. I enjoyed this short poem. Good post.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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thaities, thank you a mere twenty-two days removed from official Spring, Yeah!
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Spring is the best time of the year!
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent it suits the season now approaching and tames the syllables with great affection delivering an adequate knowledge with a picturesque and emotional sentiment.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Excellent it suits the season now approaching and tames the syllables with great affection delivering an adequate knowledge with a picturesque and emotional sentiment.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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thank you a mere twenty-two days removed from official Spring, Yeah!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That expression certainly comes true at that time of the year. I like your interpretation of the saying, in like a lion, out like a lamb. Your words have so much imagery it's easy to see the lion and the lamb as one roars and one hops gently in the fields. I really like that picture! :)) Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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That expression certainly comes true at that time of the year. I like your interpretation of the saying, in like a lion, out like a lamb. Your words have so much imagery it's easy to see the lion and the lamb as one roars and one hops gently in the fields. I really like that picture! :)) Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Smiling back! Thank you, enjoy the best that life bring you!
Comment from Gail Denham
Good job with this even/odds poem. I wonder if the lamb would "skip" instead of "hop" - actually I guess the Bible speaks of this time - when the lion lies down with the lamb. that would be something to see.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Good job with this even/odds poem. I wonder if the lamb would "skip" instead of "hop" - actually I guess the Bible speaks of this time - when the lion lies down with the lamb. that would be something to see.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hi Gail trying to meet the requirement of the first and stanza being a synonym I find too restrictive I think skip would be far superior but not acceptable option. Thanks and have a grand day!
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Oh that's why you used that word - didn't read the requirements - still, it is a good job.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written even the odds poem about the lion that is feared by all other creatures become as tame as a lamb when it is time for change.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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A very well-written even the odds poem about the lion that is feared by all other creatures become as tame as a lamb when it is time for change.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Sandra, thank you much!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good use of the lion and lamb as metaphors for harsh winter and simple tame Spring. It is a perfect picture to illustrate the words.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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This is a good use of the lion and lamb as metaphors for harsh winter and simple tame Spring. It is a perfect picture to illustrate the words.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thanks Joan, gosh darn it took me too many tries on this one - I could not get my arms wrapped around the synonym until moments ago!
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You're welcome
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine evens odds poem and I enjoyed the sentiments here, this photo is of course fake because that lion could never sit with a lamb, but your message here is clear and I enjoyed this poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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This is a fine evens odds poem and I enjoyed the sentiments here, this photo is of course fake because that lion could never sit with a lamb, but your message here is clear and I enjoyed this poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thanks Dolly.
Comment from Patty Palmer
And so the Ides of March begins. Evidently, it must not be very good from the sounds of it. Your poem makes some sense of it. By taming the lion and causing the lamb to purr. Looks like you got everything under control!
Patty
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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And so the Ides of March begins. Evidently, it must not be very good from the sounds of it. Your poem makes some sense of it. By taming the lion and causing the lamb to purr. Looks like you got everything under control!
Patty
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Patty, if life was so simple. But we have twenty-three days until the calendar informs us it is Spring.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Ides of March", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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"The Ides of March", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you, as always dear Duchess!
Dear Anon,
You're more than welcome.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. I have seen this format before and I understand the format. Your poem fits the format as I understand it. Something I noticed was the fact that the lamb purred. I was looking for a bleat. :)))
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hello mystery writer. I have seen this format before and I understand the format. Your poem fits the format as I understand it. Something I noticed was the fact that the lamb purred. I was looking for a bleat. :)))
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I would have loved the bleat, but alas that dang synonym rule -- so restrictive. But, the good news is we have twenty-three days until the calendar informs us it is Spring! Bleat, Bleat!
